rate_review Reviews

I just read the first eleven chapters of this story, and I have to say that I really dig it! I have to tell you that I was wary at first. So many of these kinds of stories are so implausible that you can't lose yourself in them and go along with the fantasy. You've managed to pull me along quite nicely. I enjoy your sense of humor, which I think helps make "Shelly" a little deeper and more believable. Here's hoping that you finish this story. Can't wait to see the next chapter.

(Pardon my crudeness in advance)

Sooo... who gets to fuck her first?

Good story. I have been keeping up with this story since u started. I like it. Your a good writer.

Love it.

This story does seem to be a bit cliche -- well, actually, it's like two cliches put into one -- but I like it nonetheless. I've never seen anyone who could take a cliche and still make it interesting. I am certain that you have more than a few tricks up your sleeve to break away from that model, and that plan of Conrad's and Hunter is the tip of the iceberg. I love Hunter. And I love Conrad. Sheila -- er, Ophelia -- is one lucky girl. Can't wait until I can see more.

What a lovely Christmas present. :)

Amazing as always. Keep up the great work and happy holidays!

Love the new chapter! Happy holidays!

I just wanted to say that this story is amazing! The basic premise reminds me of a series written by Sunny, the first book being Mona Lisa Awakening. However, I feel that your story is so much more fascinating. I love the twists you have, and the fact that your main character is actually intelligent and has realistic reactions to high stress/crazy situations. I'm glad that she doesn't suddenly have millions of amazing super powers, but I think it'd be interesting if her healing ability got a boost from being in contact with her lineage land. I love the portrayals of Conrad and Hunter... definitely hoping for a hot threesome =D
Thank you for the great story and Happy Holidays! (I like your other story as well ^^)

This reads so much like a novel I'd be surprised if you aren't Laurell K Hamilton herself, writing these fics of yours. Majestic work.

Awesome..I do miss Hunter and Conrad though...the sexy seductivenes....UPDATE SOON!!!