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June 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I am sorry to say this but this story was so hard to finish for me, it was way too unbelievable and cheesy. First off, already three years into a four year college at the age of 12? Yeah right. Thats a bunch of BS. Also the color of his skin being 'unhuman' also unimpressed me. the emotions from the main character were also not really believable either, he never really suffered or anything so he had no reason to be so 'blank'. This story overall could use some more work on the character development.
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October 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
wow that’s a great story do sad though, i hope you will continue with the story, i want to see what happens to him. and if you can manage have the father die in some very horrible way
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October 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
scarily well written