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March 18, 2011 at 12:00 AM
This story is absolutely beautiful in it's execution. The characters are so real and the complexities of their love are...well....nice and complex. Your style is lovely, giving us enough information to know what's going on and for it to feel like a story rather than a dialogue, but not so overwhelming that the reader loses interest. I can't wait to read more <3
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July 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
well it's good that he really does like her! eeps! update soon!
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July 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
MOG! I love this! please update!
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February 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Yay! I love Mafia stories! :D
I think one of the things that’s rather touching about this story is the love Cettina and Furio feel for each other. It’s so strong and constant, you can feel it. Yet they have this problem between them because of his occupation. For that reason, I’m actually afraid this story doesn’t have a happy ending. :-(
And while this story may have started off rather slow, you definitely have left us with a major cliffhanger. I mean I can’t believe he brought the woman back to their place for safekeeping and why is she screaming. Eeeek! You have me all concerned now!
I loved the hot sex scene though. Please update soon!!!
Oh yes and by the way “a crack of flash against flash.” Did you mean “flesh against flesh?” Wasn’t sure??? :D
I think one of the things that’s rather touching about this story is the love Cettina and Furio feel for each other. It’s so strong and constant, you can feel it. Yet they have this problem between them because of his occupation. For that reason, I’m actually afraid this story doesn’t have a happy ending. :-(
And while this story may have started off rather slow, you definitely have left us with a major cliffhanger. I mean I can’t believe he brought the woman back to their place for safekeeping and why is she screaming. Eeeek! You have me all concerned now!
I loved the hot sex scene though. Please update soon!!!
Oh yes and by the way “a crack of flash against flash.” Did you mean “flesh against flesh?” Wasn’t sure??? :D
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February 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hot sex scene! ;).
I'm very interested to know what happens with the kidnapped girl - please update soon.
I'm very interested to know what happens with the kidnapped girl - please update soon.
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November 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
UPDATEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! PLEASEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE
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November 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
this is realli good ...... pleasseeeeeeeee update sooon !!!!!!!!!