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January 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i like it! it has fear and still there is hope. it's something that someone like me can be inspired by because of that hope... i really like it, hun!
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November 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
It flowed quite nicly and I liked your use of periods.
Question though: What was so confusing about my poem? Is it the format? Or the content?
You just made periods and question marks, so I'm confused. I'm not taking this as an offence or anything I just would like to know if there's anything you would like me to change or add, constuctive critisism (did I spell that right?).
Question though: What was so confusing about my poem? Is it the format? Or the content?
You just made periods and question marks, so I'm confused. I'm not taking this as an offence or anything I just would like to know if there's anything you would like me to change or add, constuctive critisism (did I spell that right?).
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October 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i like it.
it made me simle my writing gets so dark sometimes,its nice to read something that ends happy
it made me simle my writing gets so dark sometimes,its nice to read something that ends happy