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When are you going to update, I really must know what happens. It's her mom that thinks she's evil right? I am just going to keep making stupid guesses until you update. I can't wait.

Just think your torment will continue with a new roommate who never shuts up. I'd say you should be nominated for sainthood but you ARE writing a story about a half demon. :-) as for titles...i'll get back to you. I do like MoonCalf though. It might just be different enough that people look it up and then get it or that they just pick up the book to see what in the world it's about.

Even though it took me a very long time to recognize the title (ahem...that is, I was reading the Tempest and was like, "Hey! Oh yeah!") I think "Mooncalf" is very much an acceptable title as far as I believe you reference the word in the story itself, and it just sounds cool. I like it. XD

Hey I just want to say that I love your story and fully intend to hold you to your promise!

CL

Personally, it was the unique name that first drew me into the story. Although I didn't realize the significance of the title, the combination of the name and summary did drew me in to find out what Mooncalf or a Mooncalf was.

But isn't that the way it usually is? Authors title a book in a way that can't be fully understood unless you read it. When that happens to me, I get a little joy out of having finally finding out the meaning behind the title. I may just be a geek, but it feels as if I know a secret. Haha.

Sorry if that doesn't help much, but I just thought I'd put it out there. If you change it, I'm sure it'll be fitting. You could call it "Randy-Ass Lil' Sex Demon Drinking Holla-Back-Girl Juice" and I'd still read it just to find out what happens. xD

Baha! I love it, she has allergies yay!

Each chapter gets better! There's starting to be more depth to the characters without it getting dull. The suspense is building!!! I can't wait till the next chapter. :)

Okay Chapter 10 & 11 hon. Um not sure how I feel about them. After the major blow up at the end of 9 I kind of expected the guardians to have a more active role in coming after her. Unless of course I missed something (which we BOTH know is totally possible ^_^). I do like the movement of Cam & Jake's relationship. IT's moving at a sedate pace but keeping up with the action that's going on. LOVE Cam & Marabelle's relationship. It's quite obvious that either one of them is actually starting to like the other b/c of their bickering with one another. They match up incredibly well in both manipulation-icity (yes, i know not a word but work with me) and in audacity. I mean, both are giving the other grief for sneaking a guy into their rooms. They respect one another and it's a great dichotomy to her 'friendship' with Jane. Which i'm kind of iffy about. I know Jane has had quite a bit thrown at her but she needs to either stick around or bust out of the "group." It's great seeing a softer side of Cam, in regards to Jane, but at the same time it give the impression of a doomed relationship. Almost like Jane and Marabelle are gonna be changing places in the line up eventually. Which isn't a bad thing, btw. I LOVE that we got to see that Cam isn't the only one dealing with 'new' emotions where the opposite gender is concerned. All in all, I think that Cam is as interesting as before (if not a little bit mroe scary). Now that we know her powers are stronger and more now than before, I'm really worried about her. Way to go!

I don't think you should feel lost - so far, everything is making sense (I mean, as much as it can to us readers). After reading the last two chapters, I have to say that this new level of intricacy in your plot it awesome. So many things to question, little twists that are unexpected but fabulous at the same time, and you've managed to keep Cam's dry wit through it all. And those little tidbits of tension between Jack and Cam are well placed (I'm a sucker for well-written tension). These last two chapters, more than the rest I think, have made me more interested to find where you are taking this story and eager to find out what happens to Cam.

In short, I still absolutely love this story!

~cu-kid

I really love this! The last chapter was especially good. Watching Cam break down had a bitter sweet feeling to it. I'm at the point where I can't help but root her on, and to see her get so destructive still makes me think "Hell yeah! Start a fake tornado threat! Woo!" Haha.

Please update! There are so very few stories I love on this site!