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October 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Yes, it does need formatting. I didn't realize that was how it came out I'll have to fix that as soon as I can before I leave. Thank you for reviewing Kynrael it means a lot to me. If you liked that then maybe you'll like my other poem "Little One". It's really more of thoughts, feelings, and experiences; all focused into these prayer like poems. I'll work on the formatting I promise.
Butterfly Beauty
Butterfly Beauty
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October 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
It`s beautiful :)
Sounds more like a prayer - something many of our (romantically aligned) kind has recited in a way.
But it needs formatting - otherwise it looks like a chunk of words and this takes away the melody of your poem.
Since I haven`t posted anything here, yet - I have no clue if you need to format it in here or simply can copy & paste it from your text program.
Sounds more like a prayer - something many of our (romantically aligned) kind has recited in a way.
But it needs formatting - otherwise it looks like a chunk of words and this takes away the melody of your poem.
Since I haven`t posted anything here, yet - I have no clue if you need to format it in here or simply can copy & paste it from your text program.