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by Lunarwench

schedule August 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I just started your story today and it is amazing! I don't think I've gotten thru a chapter w/o crying! Your writing is so good, so descriptive; I FEEL Ethan's pain, his lonliness and sadness. And Fen, OMG, could I have one? Please? Pretty please???? He's amazing! I just wanted to r & r before I continue reading. GREAT, GREAT story!
schedule August 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
ARGH! Why do I have a bad feeling concerning their relationship!? ><
schedule August 9, 2009 at 12:00 AM
So, this is amazing. I'm bad for not leaving reviews for the first 3 chapters, I know, but I couldn't stop reading. The fanart is AMAZING btw. I'm thoroughly impressed with whoever did the three together in black and white (against the wall was rly hott rofl)... So yeah! I'm going to go read some more! >.> Have I mentioned that this is amazing?
schedule August 9, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oh god! Cliffhanger! -SCREAMS!- What are those evil assholes going to do to Ethan and Fen NOW?! -Sets them on fire.- >>; Ahem. =] It is going wonderfully and I am anxiously aniticpating your next update. This is one of my few favorites so please, for the love of god, continue!
person Anon
schedule August 9, 2009 at 12:00 AM
... That was not nice! How do you think I will be able to calm down before knowing what's happenig?
Oh well. I guess I'm forced to wait... I liked the longness of this. I really love how sweet those two can be! I really really love them a lot! I can't wait to see what Fen's memories have to tell, and why he's so afraid that Ethan will stop loving him. Does Fen have something to do with the death of Ethan's family? I can't wait to read more!
person smint45
schedule August 9, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Aw that chappie was really strange!!!! I really don't get what is going on!!!! But I have a bad feeling about Fen having somthing to do with eathans familly being killed!!!! But that might just be my imagination!!! I really hope that eathan keeps true to his word and will not turn away from fen when he know everything!!!!! I really want to know what fen has kept secret all along but I have the feeling that it will not be something plesant!!!!! I hope you give us the next chappie soon cause I really want to see where this is leading!!!!!! See you next time!!!!!
schedule August 9, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oh what an evil cliffie monkey you are. I am so worried about what Fen has to show Ethan. I'm thinking it has something to do with how Ethans family was killed. I am so sad for the two of them.
schedule August 9, 2009 at 12:00 AM
really great! I wonder what made Fen so upset. and I hope ethan will forgive him!
person vlight
schedule August 9, 2009 at 12:00 AM
this story is wonderful ..
The little human is amusing and can't help but love him XD
schedule August 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Uh-oh. I'm only having a HUGE idea what Fen has to explain to Ethan. D:

*is on edge of my computer chair*