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September 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
*Stares with her mouth hanging open*
I have something to say.
A Long ways back. I came across this story, and the idea of such a being(Fen) kept me amazed, i loved how beautiful yet dangerous he seemed. How he could make your heart ooze, yet put up a wall of armor for protection.
I loved how Eathan. A Mere human, stood up to him, and thought there troubles the love grew
Once day though, my computer crashed. I had your stories bookmarked, yet when i returned i couldn't find them. Today, i read 7 whole chapters, each one holding me captive, i couldn't leave the screen once i had found this amazing story once again.
I Have to say, your imagination is captivating, there world seems like a paradise, a perfect realm keeping the tainted out. It beautiful with new untold creatures. It amazes me.
Not only that, but you entertain us with brilliant smut, that might make a few of us blush while reading. Ha ha!
But, the more i read, the more i am in love with this story.
The way you descrbe Fen makes me want to package him up and sell him as a exotic desert or something. And the way you describe Ethan is amazeing also. I mean, his past, how you link it all together in this ginat web, how he feels with Fen, and all these new outragious things.
I love it.
Simply,
Love it.
I cannot tell you how happy i was to find this story once more. To read what all has happened and to be captivated.
No matter how many people tell you to 'hurry up' don't listen. YES, we DO want your writing to come to us as soon as possible of course. BUT, we wouldn't want you, to write something you hated, just to sate our curiosity.
Don't write these stories for us, write them for yourself.
We are just watches of something great.
A True imaginary writer, that goes off something deep in there brain.
Your stories are just... awesome. I cant explain them any other way!!
So please, do not stop your writing, even if it is mere rambles.
we DO love it,
we DO admire it
and we DO want to steal a Fen from that world to keep to ourselves and hide in the basements of our Home. Ha ha!
I cannot wait, tell the next chapter comes out.
In till then, we shall all be waiting!
Excellent, just excellent.
-White Moth
I have something to say.
A Long ways back. I came across this story, and the idea of such a being(Fen) kept me amazed, i loved how beautiful yet dangerous he seemed. How he could make your heart ooze, yet put up a wall of armor for protection.
I loved how Eathan. A Mere human, stood up to him, and thought there troubles the love grew
Once day though, my computer crashed. I had your stories bookmarked, yet when i returned i couldn't find them. Today, i read 7 whole chapters, each one holding me captive, i couldn't leave the screen once i had found this amazing story once again.
I Have to say, your imagination is captivating, there world seems like a paradise, a perfect realm keeping the tainted out. It beautiful with new untold creatures. It amazes me.
Not only that, but you entertain us with brilliant smut, that might make a few of us blush while reading. Ha ha!
But, the more i read, the more i am in love with this story.
The way you descrbe Fen makes me want to package him up and sell him as a exotic desert or something. And the way you describe Ethan is amazeing also. I mean, his past, how you link it all together in this ginat web, how he feels with Fen, and all these new outragious things.
I love it.
Simply,
Love it.
I cannot tell you how happy i was to find this story once more. To read what all has happened and to be captivated.
No matter how many people tell you to 'hurry up' don't listen. YES, we DO want your writing to come to us as soon as possible of course. BUT, we wouldn't want you, to write something you hated, just to sate our curiosity.
Don't write these stories for us, write them for yourself.
We are just watches of something great.
A True imaginary writer, that goes off something deep in there brain.
Your stories are just... awesome. I cant explain them any other way!!
So please, do not stop your writing, even if it is mere rambles.
we DO love it,
we DO admire it
and we DO want to steal a Fen from that world to keep to ourselves and hide in the basements of our Home. Ha ha!
I cannot wait, tell the next chapter comes out.
In till then, we shall all be waiting!
Excellent, just excellent.
-White Moth
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September 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
omg nooooooo i just started reading a few days ago and im hooked!!! more please waaah!!
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August 31, 2009 at 12:00 AM
17.... ooooooh gods I have a bad feelng it was FEN who kill Ethan's whole family...
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August 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
O_O... I'm scared... Truly. I don't want these memories to tear apart the love they have for eachother! =( I'll seriously CRY if that happens! Cry all over my keyboard, and then you'll have to buy me a new laptop!... Well, not really, but I WILL be upset! lol GAHHHHH, I hate that white-cracker birdman that just seems to get his kicks from torturing people. *GROWL!!!* XD PLEASE update again soon! I NEED to know what happens! *strangles monitor* lmao
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August 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Omg, awesome chapter, but wicked cliff hanger. Please, please tell me Fen wasn't partly responsible for the death of Ethan's family.
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August 12, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I just finished ch. 16, and I gotta tell you, I LOVE PAZU! She is GREAT!!!! But, something I don't understand: maybe I read it wrong; Pazu said she was born on Ethan's side and even went to college there. She also said she was taking him to a big city, where she went to school. So, doesn't that mean they would be on Ethan's side? I was confused about that! And how great for Ethan to see other humans walking around! This is such an interesting, riveting story! I am amazed by your vivid imagination and your imagery in describing everything. Just amazing! I only have one more chapter left before I am caught up; and I'm already feeling the pangs of withdrawal!
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August 12, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oh, and p.s. I love when Ethan calls it Luftyland! It's hysterical!
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August 12, 2009 at 12:00 AM
OMG, I have this sickening feeling that Fen had something to do w/Ethan's family's deaths. I swear my stomach bottomed out when I was reading the end of the chapter. OMG, I feel so horrible for Ethan, I'm too afraid to read what Fen is going to confess. But....not to afraid to ask for a quick update! Hahah Seriously tho, GREAT FUCKING CHAPTER!!!!! I'll be anxiously awaiting (with Ethan) Fen's confession!
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August 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I absolutely LOVE this story. It IS, not one of, my FAVE Original stories of all time. The longest, most understandable, most affecting story I've ever read. And I really, really look forward to what you plan to write after every chapter. Every one of your updates keep me on the edge of my chair, and sometimes they are so heart stopping that tears come to my eyes : ) (good tears, I promise. sometimes sad ones though if ethan or fen is sad...)
but man, is this story thrilling or what!! I'm so glad that ethan managed to make some friends in this last chapter. too bad of how it ended, however. What does Fen plan to show Ethan? I bet that Fen had something to do with the death of Ethan's parents.... But man, that'll make Ethan really really upset... He'll probably feel even more betrayed and angry, and gosh who knows that those two already have a rocky relationship. I really hope that Ethan has become more understanding of the fact that Fen has his secrets, and that the death of his parents wasn't his or Fen's fault.
No matter what is shown in the next update, I really hope Ethan doesn't throw away Fen. He can't! They've been through enough hurt as it is, so much angst!!! And I can't imagine how much pain Fen can take, or Ethan. I just hope that Ethan pulls through whatever is going to be revealed in the next chapter.
and what is up with Gevi? what's his problem? and the king's??
why is Fen so against being the king's son? that answer probably will be answered soon, however...
I really hope questions get answered soon.
I can't wait to read what you have planned for us readers. I hope the next udpate is soon! I really am anticipating for the next update. The wait is excruciating!!!
: ) Looking forward to it, and I hope Fen and Ethan aren't too hurt by what happens next, especially Ethan.
Can't wait!!!
but man, is this story thrilling or what!! I'm so glad that ethan managed to make some friends in this last chapter. too bad of how it ended, however. What does Fen plan to show Ethan? I bet that Fen had something to do with the death of Ethan's parents.... But man, that'll make Ethan really really upset... He'll probably feel even more betrayed and angry, and gosh who knows that those two already have a rocky relationship. I really hope that Ethan has become more understanding of the fact that Fen has his secrets, and that the death of his parents wasn't his or Fen's fault.
No matter what is shown in the next update, I really hope Ethan doesn't throw away Fen. He can't! They've been through enough hurt as it is, so much angst!!! And I can't imagine how much pain Fen can take, or Ethan. I just hope that Ethan pulls through whatever is going to be revealed in the next chapter.
and what is up with Gevi? what's his problem? and the king's??
why is Fen so against being the king's son? that answer probably will be answered soon, however...
I really hope questions get answered soon.
I can't wait to read what you have planned for us readers. I hope the next udpate is soon! I really am anticipating for the next update. The wait is excruciating!!!
: ) Looking forward to it, and I hope Fen and Ethan aren't too hurt by what happens next, especially Ethan.
Can't wait!!!
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August 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
ASDFJKLMNOO!!! Need more! But I will wait. V.V
Anyway, awwwww! I got a shout-out! My email address is in my last journal entry, if you want to contact me through that, but you said somewhere that you weren't one for emailing, so... XP
I've missed you, too! I've been checking AFF daily for your updates! And I've been rereading a ton of your stories. The Van and Ethan one made me giggle, but it was so drool-worthy at the same time. Hubba hubba...
Allllllllso! I'm writing Attic slowly because I keep re-checking myself by re-reading Rooftop chaps. I'm almost done with chapter two. I'll post all the ones I've done once I get back in November!
So, I should probably review in this review... AHEM! IT. WAS. SO. CUTE!... And I really do like Pazu, d'awwww, she's so kind. And Ethan was absolutely adorable when he was all excited about the water and now I'm all freaked out because I don't want Fen and Ethan to be ruined by whatever's in those memories.
OH! ALSO! I was rereading Chapter Six AND GAH YOU MAKE ME CRY! I actually cried, like... cried... Especially whenever Ethan made Fen feel so bad. I think I was emotional that day. And it's sad to read about Fen not being happy with Ethan... But it's such a good chapter, gawd...
I'm gonna stop, cuz this is a ridiculous review... that's only partly a review... SO! I miss you too, I'll be back soon enough! BYE!
=SeekRett=
Anyway, awwwww! I got a shout-out! My email address is in my last journal entry, if you want to contact me through that, but you said somewhere that you weren't one for emailing, so... XP
I've missed you, too! I've been checking AFF daily for your updates! And I've been rereading a ton of your stories. The Van and Ethan one made me giggle, but it was so drool-worthy at the same time. Hubba hubba...
Allllllllso! I'm writing Attic slowly because I keep re-checking myself by re-reading Rooftop chaps. I'm almost done with chapter two. I'll post all the ones I've done once I get back in November!
So, I should probably review in this review... AHEM! IT. WAS. SO. CUTE!... And I really do like Pazu, d'awwww, she's so kind. And Ethan was absolutely adorable when he was all excited about the water and now I'm all freaked out because I don't want Fen and Ethan to be ruined by whatever's in those memories.
OH! ALSO! I was rereading Chapter Six AND GAH YOU MAKE ME CRY! I actually cried, like... cried... Especially whenever Ethan made Fen feel so bad. I think I was emotional that day. And it's sad to read about Fen not being happy with Ethan... But it's such a good chapter, gawd...
I'm gonna stop, cuz this is a ridiculous review... that's only partly a review... SO! I miss you too, I'll be back soon enough! BYE!
=SeekRett=