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October 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Wow, I was reading the new chapter and was totally confused, thinking I was reading the wrong story! Until the end, when I realized that the chapter was about Fen's childhood. How sad it was.
But what happened to Ethan in the last chapter? This story is so good; I'm glad you're continuing with it!
But what happened to Ethan in the last chapter? This story is so good; I'm glad you're continuing with it!
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October 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
The story keeps getting better. I think we will finally get to find out why Fen was there to witness the murder of Ethan's family. I hope Ethan will be able to understand how much Fen has been betrayed by his family. Fen's father is a monster. How could he ever leave his mistress and his own child in such a horrible place? As king he could have taken much better care of them. Even now he is still trying to betray Fen by separating him from Ethan. I hope Ethan will be strong enough to support Fen and to help him fight against his father and Gevi. I just want to say that I love all your stories. You are definitely one of the best writers at AFF.
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October 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
WHAT! So sad, why does Fen have such a horrible father?
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October 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
wow that was intense haha i loved it! please post the next part soon!
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October 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Wow what an awesome part one to this chapter. This really helps to explain why Fen hates his father so much. I wish I could tell you specifically what it is I like about this story, but I'm not very good at reviewing. I just love it. Not sure why. I've lived it from the first chapter. So glad to see an update again.
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October 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oh My.. dreadful past for Fen. I can't wait to know what happens after. Thanks for the update
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October 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Wow great chapter...finally we know about his past.....I hope his small friend wasn´t in a car accident or so.....
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October 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
honestly, I'm just glad to know you're alive. I love this story, and I'm glad you're finally divulging Fen's secrets with us. :3 great chapter. Can't wait for the next!!!
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September 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Usually, i dont really like to read chapters that are so long as this one was, but this is so good i dont want it to end. Ever. This is so good, i barely know what to write, there's nothing for me to comment on, except your eccellent writing and great story. Im completely blown away by this fic. I cant wait for the next chapter to come:D
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September 9, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I came across this story maybe two days ago, and I have to say that it's one of the best on this site. I found it a little slow moving in between them being caught in the woods and where they are now, but I also think that it was necessary. It can't all be smut, and I for one would prefer an actual plot and deeper characters than nothing but constant sex. Anyway, I can't wait to read the next chapter and find out what Fen's been hiding all this time! Hope you update soon :D