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October 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
it is good! and it is hot! i liked the ending of chap2- when he found out that fen could talk, and got angry :P me looking forwards for the next chapter
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October 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
keep going its intresting
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October 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i want more now please. that was so freaken hot you have no idea. and what the heck kind of creature is fin any ways? :)
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October 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
hot sex, keep it up bitch ;)
Sorry too tired and lazy to write more....
for a first sex scene pretty good !
Sorry too tired and lazy to write more....
for a first sex scene pretty good !
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October 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
lmfao i love the sense of humor you put in here. :)
after all that sex, "You could talk the whole goddamn time?!" LOLOLOLLLL
wonderful~ please continue!
after all that sex, "You could talk the whole goddamn time?!" LOLOLOLLLL
wonderful~ please continue!
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October 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
some people are never happy.
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October 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i definately want to know what the someone or something is!
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October 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I really liked this story, I hope there will be more.
A little sad though and what was standing on the ledge,watching him?
Butterfly Beauty
A little sad though and what was standing on the ledge,watching him?
Butterfly Beauty
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October 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Nicely written story. I wonder what that 'something' is... I'm intrigued.
-Hello
-Hello
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October 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I totally guessed that his name was Ethan before you even said it. xD I just pictured him like one, I guess. o.o Anyway, man...depressing. So much depressing stuff on here, it can really get a guy down, ya know? But, nonetheless, well written, and I hope that Ethan runs into a sexy 'someone' that'll help cheer him up. =D!