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for Rooftop

by Lunarwench

person Sekre
schedule October 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Adore it :)
person Zsadarya
schedule October 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
It is very hot, but I won't call you bitch. Keep on writing this fic, too, because it's interesting and somehow different. I cant't exactly say why, because the plot is not entirely new. However, I would like to read more of it.
person violetstorm713
schedule October 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This is interesting. I am wondering what this "IT" is, but "IT" sounds sexy!
person Anon
schedule October 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
hot sex, keep it up bitch
person safarigirl
schedule October 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
"hot sex, keep it up, bitch." ^_^ Seriously, hot! And a good read too. ^_^
schedule October 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story you have going. I hope you keep it up! It's fun to read... And intiresting. I want weird bird..Furry... Man!
Ha ha.
Hope you add another soon.

and the 'HotManSexThatMakesYouStareAtTheScreenWantingMore' was great.
Good job!
Now all we need is another one of those scenes...
Ha ha.
Bravo.
person AngelicChaos
schedule October 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That was hot. More please? *Beg kindly*
person janas
schedule October 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
liked da ending, was funny
and yeah it seems really interesting so update soon!!!
person Anon
schedule October 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
For anything or something's or WHATEVER SAKE. CONTINUE!!!!! S^ªDSLKKºÇ
person Nikki
schedule October 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Do you have a spare bucket? Because, I'm having a drool fest from hell right about now. PLEASE TELL ME THAT THERE IS GOING TO BE MORE! That sex scene is crazy hot. Now that, is what I call: Rough animalistic sex make it hurt style. That last line, lol, it's f*ckin classic! I love this fic and your characters. Now, this Fen character is very interesting. He caught my attention really bad by trying to picture him. But for some reason, my brain is not functioning *sob*. Anyway, please update soon! I see alot of potential in this and you can bet you bottom dollar, that THIS... IS WORTH WAITING FOR AND READING;p Major kudos to you. Read you laters!!!!