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I'm seriously exhausted. I just spent the last... 8? hours dedicated to reading all of your chapters since I gave it a shot so WOW. I really love the characters, the plot, story...etc. You get the idea. I'm pretty tired since I started reading at 1am and haven't gotten much sleep since I keep waking up and giving up on sleeping to read your story through my dust-filled eyes but it was completely worth it. The end got really emotional and it was something I kinda thought might happen from little hints here and there but was still devestating to read. I think what makes everything harder is the fact that Fen really loves Ethan and you can basically tell where he was coming from this. He didn't want to tell Ethan because he was completely afraid that Ethan will hate him when he finds the truth. At the same time, you understand Ethan's point of you; this person whom he gave his hard-to-earn trust to was the one who basically accdientally killed the meaning of his life (his family). I really don't like Gevi at all and I'm half and half about the King. He seemed to truly care about Fen and his mom, especially now, but wha was the reason for the abandonment? I really want to know the story there. I really like Asterac but I hope Ethan doesn't get with him or anything because Fen is still really sweet and I love him ^__^ I really hope they make up but Fen has to work for it! >D and I really want to know the entire story like what was the reason for the King's changes and for Fen's retrieval or what not. Anyways, great job so far and hope for more~! <3

Very interesting. I did not see all of this jazz coming up (I just read the last three chapters). God, Ethan has had way too much to handle, poor lil guy. And I don't trust his Asterac (sp?). Something's fishy. But I'm glad that Fen is finally being honest with Ethan, and with himself. I hope they work it out and Ethan can find it to forgive his poor, stupid mate. I suspect he will. But...what other trials will come before them?!! Dun Dun Dun! Can't wait to read the next bit :)

Right now, I'm not liking Ethan very much. I can understand his anger, but he's being quite selfish. Fen is another creature, there's no doubt he has many secrets and Ethan just expects him to know all of it? Both of them couldn't have planned this, and yet Ethan is making such a huge deal about it. Maybe I'm wrong, but Ethan almost acts as if he's done nothing wrong. Yes, true that Fen could have told him all this before hand. I'm not sure how Fen really could look into Ethan's eyes like he did, but he loves Ethan. He's not totally perfect either and he can make mistakes.
I love Fen, though. Throughout this story, Ethan has made mistake after mistake, even almost killing himself and Fen too. Fen has saved him all his life, but no Ethan won't even think about this.
I dunno, I think I like Fen way more than Ethan.
But hey, this is your story and I'm just a mere reader : )
Anyway, despite Ethan's negative attitude about this, I loved this chapter. It really says a lot, and I really hope Ethan doesn't cheat on Fen with Alsterac. (I think that's how you spell it......)
I foresee something big happening soon. Maybe a big dramatic/action filled chapter where Ethan forgives Fen or something like that. Cause those two HAVE to end up together in the end. They HAVE to!!! Otherwise if they don't, I can't say I won't be disappointed and most likely very angry. But yeah I really hope Ethan gets back with him. In my mind I see Fen as a child who wants nothing but to love his toys and cherish them (not saying that Ethan is a toy or anything like that....)
I hope you update the next chapter soon, because I am very very looking forward to it. Hope it's not as angst filled as this, because yes I did very much in fact tear up when Ethan was yelling at Fen. poor fen...
Anyway, can't wait for it!!!
: )

Wow, what a shitty position for Fen and Ethan. lol, if I'd have known how depressing these few chapters were, I might have held off readinYg them until something happier happens. No, that's a lie. As soon as I saw there were chapters I hadn't read I lost all ability at patience. This whole drug addict angle has changed my view of Fen and I love it. Not that he was a user (that's pretty distasteful), but that he isn't some idealized victim who lead a blameless life despite his horrible circumstances. Yay for complexity!

oh my goodness ...what is "the dark evil wall monster"... the truth ? fear?...i dunno ...poor boys i hope things work out urgh fen has a lot to make up for...please don't take more than three months to update ...it would make me sad but i'll wait like a good reader.....love you writing by the way.....sorry this is my first review ....just figured out how to do it

OHMAIGOSH PLZ UPDATE SOON..
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thats would be horrible... this is really good! I got caught up on like.. four chapters today!! woot woot..
just confused..
I didnt think Ethan would respsond that way... though you left enough hints for me to garner were the plot was going [ parents death]
like i think... that ethans oersonality before hand.. would have gone back to the room... but like.. slept in a closet or something..

i get where you went just had me thinking slightly out of character.. but thats just my perception..

I just gave your link for this story toolike six people to try and get them addicted to it.. [ and possibly yaoi]
but yeah.. I hope this works.. the stupid "stop scam" things always screws up my messages..
OHMAIGOSH PLZ UPDATE SOON :P

Wow! It's been so long I almost forgot about this fic! D:

I hope things get better between Fen and Ethan soon. The angst truly was heartbreaking. Wouldn't be surprised if there's more in the next chapter......

Thanks for updating and I wish you good luck in enduring that awful thing called life. DX

You're one amazing author, ms. luna! This story is epicly delicious. Your characters are multifaceted in a way that blends beautifully into your writing. I dont find myself questioning where a certain emotion or reaction is coming from, which usually tends to irk me when I'm reading original creations. I adore Fen, even though he's a bit naughty right now. Hopefully he redeems himself!

The conversation between Fen and Ethan - or shouting/crumbling - was interesting, because it opened another window in Fen's personality. It's sad that he did first everything from guilt but then again it's more realistic than the idea of him falling in love. The parts of him being stoned and drug-addict were quite heart-breaking - especially when one remembers Lugh - but you can understand little of his behavior. But this clearly hurts him very much.

Ethan's desperation of course also makes one heart squeeze and I wanted to give him the hug that Asterac (I have suspicious feelings of him, I don't know why) gave.

I hope both of them will get better.

i think ethan is a little selfish...i mean i know he throught a lot but he have to think about fen position and condition in that time too... i mean his not the center of the world so he have to consider how fen feeling too a ....Fen is guilty for many thing but he still deserve a second chance cause he still try to make everything better after that even if what he did or thinks is not perfect or absolutly good.....and again both of them need to learn about each other a lot and it will deeper they relationship....and about fen dad..i hate him.....whatever his reason abandon fen mom and fen in worse place and condition while he have a better life is unforgivable.....please keep updated...i try to give comment about this story cause i like it.....cheers...