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You are the devil! Why did you have to stop there? *growls* Eternal pain and torture are waiting for you if you do not continue quickly. Otherwise, good job, very good. :)

CHAPTER 3
Hi luna,
This story is awesome hott! I love it. All three chapters are a major turn-on :D
You give good descriptions on sex scenes, very balanced action/dialog/inner thoughts combination. Very enjoyable read.

Merry Xmas!

A knock? A knock at the door! Your kidding me RIGHT?!?!!? Oh god, please tell me you will be updateing sooner, than this last one. Please update sooner. I NEED to know what happens. Please?

I thought you had abandoned this story, and I am so glad to see that you haven't! I loved this chapter it was nice to see more of Ethan and Fen and get a couple vague answers. Though I wonder now if Fen is royalty or possibly he was sired by royalty out of wedlock and was forced to run away from his home when he was found out. Or maybe something else, either way I can't wait to find out and read more.

Update again soon, no need to worry this chapter was great I doubt you needed the full 2 weeks to work on it. Don't be paranoid just go with what works. :D

Like it so far ! This chapter is pretty good ! It was worth the waiting...
Merry christmas !!

You leave the story there? How evil! Lol, I do love your works, you have a really wonderful way of writing, your style just sort of draws the reader in, and even with rather alien characters there's a sense of humanity that really makes them relateable. I just hope there's not long till am update, lol, but a great chapter to read on Christmas ;)

Holy wow. You have talent! xD I can`t wait for more! And I`m wondering what Fen is... *ponder ponder* Lol keep up the good work~!

wow that was great!

Yay, you updated! Loved it! Fen sounds so sweeet, and Ethan's soooo cute. Wonder who's at the door....Oh well, I can wait to find out lol. Great chapter, update soon please!!!

Goddammit, I'm already in love w/ this story. And it turned me on like hell. Ur a great writer, pls UPDATE SOON, i need to read further!
Ur a valuable writer here on ff.net. Keep up the good business!!! U got my full support!