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by Lunarwench

person Coco
schedule January 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This is my favorite story written by you. I must say I do enjoy your way of writing. It's so... intellectual and funny... o.o;
WTF. LOL. I LOVE IT. PLEASE UPDATE SOON! :D
person Katariina
schedule December 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I like your stories. Especially Best Of Friends and this one seems to be as good as it. You write very well, I like your style. I hope you will continue soon!
person Chrysler
schedule December 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I wish I had a Fen....

This is an interesting story, and um...Ethan is an interesting guy. I'm just drawn to this impersonal character, his potty mouth, his quirkiness, and just how lost and reserved he is. It makes him relatable to an extent, very easy to like--which is always weird, you like these kind of people in stories, but not necessarily in real life--and I sympathize as well with whatever is bothering him but now he has Fen.

Their new relationship, the new found species, how odd it seems that they control each others minds and all that...so exciting. I wasn't sure I would really enjoy it, first reading the summary and then finding out Fen is a beast. Usually, the whole mating thing is an attractive concept, but I see it usually as wolves that are in a human form or weird creatures in a human form with a tail---nothing...furry. (haha) But I dunno....you've changed my mind, it doesn't seem weird anymore. I ADORE IT!

In fact, their mating was pretty damn hot and intense. Like I said, I really wish I had a Fen...He's so sexy and blunt and wow....I love him, he's on my top ten favorite fictional hunks. He's not icky romantic, though since I'm obsessed with homosexual relations, I doubt I could ever think yaoi romance could be icky, but still...he's not too much, he's perfect, actually. Just so darling and sweet and how he affects Ethan now and will later on, I definitely see that happy ending you're talking about, maybe with some dreaded/anticipated angst, but definitely see how they could be together.

I was a bit disappointed we wouldn't get to see where Fen came from...see the other Fen's as well, but hey, I can live with that. It's amazing what you have set up already so I'm willing to go with the flow, see how you pull this off. Anyway, damn that knock on the door...curious as to whom it is, but I really wanted to see 'All of the above' play out.

Ah well, I'm interested. Update soon, please. And Hope you had a great Christmas.
person Aleks
schedule December 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Huhu a new chapter great! dancing around and smiling......

It gets better and better.....

waiting for more!!!
person Sekre
schedule December 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Yay! Finally :) Nowhere close to a disappointment. Got me eager for more.
person irinutza
schedule December 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i would also like to have a personal angel/demon that is so loving and hot ^__^
i also liked the name Fen, it suits him well :)
person Buho
schedule December 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Holy Crap this is quickly becoming one of my favorite stories. I love Fen's way of communicating, it kinda reminds me of the old Garfield cartoons. You know how he talked but never moved his lips. Sure there were some grammar mistakes here and there but some of the times I thought it added more power and depth to what was being said.
schedule December 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
oh so you updated, i'm a bit surprised because i was sure it was going to be another of those teasingly really good beginnings of a story that are never finished. I really really really like your story, so please make it really really really long ;)
person Mr. Nice Girl
schedule December 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Nooooooo!!! Damn interruptions! This is incredibly hot thus far. I'd like to know how Fen knows so much about Ethan. It's obvious he's been watching him for a very long time... Or something. What's Ethan's connection? I'm so curious that I have to keep reading! Not only is the storyline interesting, but it's damn sexy, too.
schedule December 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
oh, my.

I had been hoping you would update this... and you did. and it's... very, very good, i think. I love Fen's character and this mystery around him (is he a demon? a monsterbeasty? has he been watching Ethan his whole life?, etc) is driving me crazy with speculation.

Also, Ethan is super adorable.

I can't wait to see where this goes.