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this is really nice and funny and sweet. i like this story. up-date soon.

I absolutely loved it! Doesn't matter that it didn't have a lemon in it or anything! It still rock! Please update it when you can! THANK YOU! ^^

Your story is a lot of fun regardless of non-continous sex scenes!

There is a lot to find out about Fen and Ethan's tradegy and survivors guilt
will take quite awhile to get through. Lots of story to tell here and I look forward
to it all!!

Thanks,
R

New reader here and I have to say I love your writing skills. Not many writers can pull the emotion out so that the reader can feel the intimacy of the characters, I really love that, it makes me want to know more about them. Fen is so wonderful and caring; he is just what Ethan needs. I was so sad for Ethan I almost felt like writing myself into your chapter to give him a big hug and try to kiss his boo boos away. Ethan's guilt about finding happiness with Fen struck a cord with me, because I know a family member that was doing that, he tried to shut himself away as if he had to be punished for living when he lost loved ones. I myself had what you call survivor's guilt for awhile when I lost very dear family members so I am able to relate to Ethan's sadness, I hope that he will be able to get past this with Fen's love. Having someone there helps a lot when one’s heart is broken and so sad. I really love Fen’s soft side, but I also love his domineering side as well. I really want to know more about Fen if he was watching Ethan go through his hardships was there a reason why he could not help him or show himself earlier to him? Is he perhaps like the grim reaper and cannot really interfere with the roles humans take and then he broke his own rule to be with Ethan? Is that why they are after him? Oooooh and the plot thickens, wonderful story, I will faithfully keep checking for more updates. Thanks I really did enjoy it. Also I love a good story plot with smut mixed in, but smut is better when the characters truly feel for each other, it makes the relationship more real. And I hope Fen keeps taking care of Ethan, you know dressing him, undressing him, bathing him and on and on…. Ahem sorry lost track there for awhile. ah what can I say, except that I hope you update soon, but I understand about real life getting in the way. thanks again.
Jewel

A comment like please update should satisfy you :)
It´s not what it doesn´t say...you should read between the lines:
Your story was worth a comment and the reader knows just after reading he wants more! as fast as possible! :)
I think that´s a big compliment!
(and sometimes I don´t have anything intelligent to write but want to show I have read the story and would like to read more...)

but okay you want more...well today I have time at last for one sentence ;)
it´s not that important but I want to know: Did they take the family foto from the hotelroom? Because last chapter you described how important it was and now I want to know if it was left behind (like I´ve said not that important but I remembered)

and not every chapter needs sex, smut is okay but not too sweet...I like the flirting best between them!
Please update soon :)

really like da plot...very mysterious
chapter 5 was a bit wierd though...da characters personality changed slightlty (i think) but it was still gud

loved it they are both so cute

I dont know if you still have plans to continue with this story, but I've just read whats up so far, and its a really awesome. Im very curious about Fen, and i love the interaction between him and Ethan. I like your writing style very much, and even if you dont post anything more, ive loved reading about the two of them. But please continue! O_o I want to hear more, i want to know what happens soooo much! :]

Wow, this is absolutely amazing. I actually can't accurately recall if I've left any kind of review for this story yet (I must be getting very old or something), but I wanted to let you know how much I love what you're doing with this story and the characters. I adore Ethan and Fen (and I love your concept of Fen and his powers, and I am intrigued by whatever it is that you're planning on revealing about his family and his past). Their interractions are amazing; the "smut" is incredible -- extremely hot but also appropriately fluffy. And I really love the way that their relationship is progressing out of bed. Ethan's fluctuating emotions are beautifully expressed; this chapter in particular was gorgeous and the angst and pain Ethan was feeling were conveyed perfectly. And Fen's reactions were absolutely ideal -- he's the perfect counterpart; his ability to keep Ethan sane and to bring him back when he's drowning in his own guilt is (for lack of a less syrupy term) heartwarming.
Thank you for the little traces of Ethan's past that you included in this chapter as well. It was very nicely executed, and such a nice way to learn more about Ethan and Fen and what makes them each tick. Plus, I love it when the tortured characters get a happy ending...especially if it includes a loving, gorgeous and well-endowed man. That makes it even better.
So, I'm here for the ride, smut or no smut. The story's killer.

I really liked this chapter. In all honesty, I prefer the moments when they interact with each other verbally, not the sex scenes. When their talking, I get so much closer to their characters. I'm really looking forward to reading more!