rate_review Reviews

Wonderful. You've created such vivid characters. Your words paint pictures and I can see the scenes unfold before me.

This is good. Keep writing.

awwww it's a super great chapter! i'm all ecstatic again - which happens every time i read this story!- it's so romantic, hot, sweet, interesting and thrilling ;)

Hey i think this is a great story! Your doing a good job, cuz i don't normally stick with an unfinished story unless i think its worth it. But this one is very interesting! so...keep up the good job!

keep going, great story
addictive!

I have loved this story since you first started writing it! Every time I see that there is a new chapter up I drop everything to read it. So you want in depth...okay. I love how Ethan is so strong, but at the same time, he wants to be possessed and cared for by Fen. And Fen is just great, he loves Ethan so much, and would do anything for him. It's a perfect relationship. Perfect in that there will be fights of course, but they love each other. And the porn is good. Really good. *grins*

So! Please update soon, because your updates make my day.

I like the pace of your story. It bring a lot more quality to it. It gives you a chance to develop your characters, to make them three dimensional. I honestly get disappointed when writers rush through the plot, either just to complete the story, or to get to one part that apparently is more important than the rest. I'm loving this story. I can't wait four the next update. Ethan has made an amzing break through, and I'm glad. I can't wait to read how this changes their relationship (for the better, I'm guessing.)

i'll start by saying this, i absolutely suck at in-depth reviews. So don't expect one, but i will say what i think, i personally adore your story. I love the characters and story-line, and the way this fic turned out. I love the smut in the story and also the deep feelings between the characters. All in all, a great story. I wouldn't change anything about it, i like how your mind works. Update when u can, i'm looking forward to reading the entire fic.

...You have incredible talent. I have read all but one of your stories (and only because I didn't like the genre or the pairing), including the originals, and I was amazed. I've only ever seen professional authors have the skill at creating so many diverse and interesting characters before. All of them have such different personalities, and the way you write the stories and portray them fits the individuality of each one to a T. Your writing style and grammar are very good, more so than most, and you seem to have a decent understanding of pace. Your words and scenes flow beautifully together and you never seem lost. Your plots are interesting with plenty of good humor. Your vocabulary can be a bit generic in some places, but that doesn't really take away from the story. I wonder, have you ever considered writing as a career? I think novellas or maybe short novels would be the best for your average story length, but short stories might work too. You should seriously consider it.

This chapter really had me feeling sorry for Ethan. I know what he did was terrible to Fen but the guilt is already eating him away.So, isn't it enough of angst-ing already? Hope that you'll update soon and perhaps it'll be a little more fluffy in the next chapter? Hehe..love your story by the way.