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January 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I read this story a long time ago and loved it, so I'm really glad you're continuing it! Thanks for the update, and I'm looking forward to the next one!
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January 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Noo! Darn cliffhangers x__x; I'm so glad you updated! I could just kiss you right now xD; I love your imagination, I can really picture the surroundings and items based on the descriptions! =]
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January 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
It's a delight to read this again. Ethan is a wonderfully dynamic character, torn and twisted by indecision, right and wrong. I should say 'very human'. All in all, he's handling his new circumstaces rather well.
Thank you,
Gnome
Thank you,
Gnome
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January 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
gah!!!
Wow
I am happy that you started this story even if it is technically a month over due:P no harm done its amazing as usual and i am soo excited and intrigued for what is to come.
Wow
I am happy that you started this story even if it is technically a month over due:P no harm done its amazing as usual and i am soo excited and intrigued for what is to come.
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January 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
That... was so evil. Cliffhanger of DOOM. But, I really like this so far (in fact I quite like most of your fiction). Your characters are so great, and react so perfectly to the situtations they are put in -- I'll be checking back for updates!
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December 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I just read chapter five. I loved how Fen got Ethan to talk about what was bothering him. It actually made me laugh at his tactics. I also love Ethan's character. The fact that he doesn't want to forget his family, and how he is acting in the tub when he thought about his happiness; it was very realistic. It really well written. I don't think I have seen any spelling or grammical errors so far which is not an easy feat. Kudos to you. Although I'm not to the last chapter that has been updated yet, please update.
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November 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i honestly cant wait for the december update! im soo excited and tortured at the same time, conflicting emotions and all. i hope that your school are work do well, so that you can quickly get back to rooftop, since you left it at a rather crucial point xD
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November 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I'm in love with your story-line, as well as your characters. Can't wait for the next installments to come out! Wonderful job.
I just want to run up and give Fen a huge hug sometimes. Hehee.
-Zen.
I just want to run up and give Fen a huge hug sometimes. Hehee.
-Zen.
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November 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This story is absolutely amazing. I am enthralled and can't stop reading. I loved the break down. It is realistic. Sad and horrible, but it is realistic and it made me love Fen and Ethan even more. It makes me want then to make it!! Keep writing! I have faith in you and you have gained a fan.
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October 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow i just finish this and it is really good.. I do hope you update this and continue with it!! Your a very talented writer... thanks for sharing!!