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Lunar~~~~~~~~

are you alright? >___< hope you are well...
and i hope it isnt bad health, bad grades, bad internet/laptop that's keeping you away from updating~ (sorry for bring pushy! >_<)

take care~ and all the best!

please please update this one and imaginary friend! They absolutely rock o.0

Chapter one,

The flash-back made me cry :'(

LUNAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAARRR~~~~

when's the next chapter comming out~~~ *whines*

*A* please~~~~ make it.. soon? =D

all the best! hope you had a good christmas, new year, and good valentines! XD
and a new laptop ;)

- nekoii

Love the chap! Fens place is great! Man you have great imagination! Glad that Ethan has become more understanding and mature now. Can;t wait for the next one!

What a cliffhanger! I was like what is under the sheets a dragon? I still want to know, I mean clearly it's his "father" but oh this is so nerve-wrecking to have to wait! I like the secretary guy (forgot his name) he's nice. Gevi is the biggest douchebag ever! I can't wait to see what happens next! Oh please update soon!

I read the whole story, and stayed up all night. I know you might have wanted reveiws on the other chapters but the wait was making me nervous so I decided at the end of the last chapter I would send you something LONG and WONDERFUL! I love this story! It has to be one of the best I have read to far! Ethan is special in his own way, and sometimes he treats Fen like he is nothing, but I understand everything perfectly. Though Fen. DAMN! He is one peice of hot ass, in my imagination. This story still though is wonderful and I think that you should keep going with it. Though, as creepy as it sounds...I cried a little when Fen was healing. I thought he was in a perment coma, and that this story was going to end tragically.

Though, through your sheer genuis you blasted through my expectations and have made an exceptionally valent story of a tale of two lovers. Though the smex is amazing I wouldn't mind seeing Fen being on bottom once. Or hell, it would be really cool if they could like switch bodies through some sort of power and everything work like that? I don't know. I ramble much! Though, through all of these words I can sum it up really quick what I want to say...

GREAT STORY!
KEEP IT UP!
I WILL REVEIW AS MUCH AS I CAN!
I WANT MORE HOT YAOI!!!!!!
YOUR AMAZING~~~!
:)


Sincerly, PuddlesIsHer77
:)

rooftops has double meanings now.

from the rooftop where ethan was 1st bonded with. to the rooftops of where the treetops are the dwelling of fen.

wow~~~

wow~~~

i hope ............ they get some action~ hehe *shiny glints in eyes*

Hey. I've just found this story and I ma glad that I have found it again in time for you to start writing the second arc otherwise I am sure I would die of anticipation. This is such a well written and well thought out story that I'm massively impressed. Not to mention the smut when it appears is mindblowingly hot! But I'm a person who like some plot with her porn so this story really satisifes my need for that. I feel so much for Ethan, he's a really deep and genuine character and I am looking forward to see how he develops in the coming chapters - especially considering his healing ability. And Fen **swoons** I wish I could meet someone like him - I'd even take the crazy men hunting him down as part of the package. He is rather delicious! And I really hope that the new guy (Sorry I forget how to spell the name properly) but I hope that he stays good because I rather like him.

Looking forward to seeing what happens next!

Ohmygosh yay!! I've been waiting for this, when I saw that the first chap of the second arc had been added, I got so excited!! I love that Ethan has healing ablilities, and it's interesting to see him exploring their bond, plus maybe he can do other cool things. And I agree with Fen, he is definitely his 'little temperamental love.' Gevi is an asshole, and I kinda like Asterac, he seems kind with a bit of humor, and he isn't all bad, I'm curious to see what part he plays in the rest of the story. I don't think I am going to like the king; Fen being literally dragged back home, wounded! The king must be depeserate/hard ass determinded to have Fen back for some reason or other, but he isn't being fair to Fen. So unless Fen magically becomes the bad guy in this fic, or his father has some amazing redeeming characteristic or really good reason for his actions that isn't selfish, I don't think I'm going like him at all. Eeehk, I'm excited to find out what happens next!! Can't wait for the next update. Keep it comin' !