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for Rooftop

by Lunarwench

person smint45
schedule May 29, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Thank you so much for the update!!! I really like this story!! i hope Eathans feeling is not right cause they don't need a nother tagedy happen so soon!!! But Still I loved this chappie!!! I hope to see you again!!! Please don't abandon us!!
person Le_Lethe
schedule May 29, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Seriously! I can't even handle this story! ah! but in a good way. Oh, you evil, dons let nuffins happen to my love birds now! I am waiting anxiously to their happy ever after! ok, update!
person hawthorne
schedule May 20, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I been reading this over the last few days... and I finally got to ch 14... gads... I have no idea how they are gonna get out of the mess they are in... I woke up thinkin about it this morning... how maybe Ethan could speak to the king... or his advisor at least... or it has something to do with his amazing aptitude with healing... I cant amagin what a wet dream for poor Fen is gonna be like... but Im dieing to read the next chapter when you post!
schedule May 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I love the descriptions of Fen's homeworld. It is very vivid and easy to picture. Already I am sensing some court politics going on !!!!
schedule May 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I am really loving the direction this story is going. I hope you continue it soon !!!
schedule May 2, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I am really loving this story. Fen is very interesting and the hero just adorable !!! The story progresses at a good pace and the description makes it easy for the reader to imagine everything. And the smex is steamy !!!
schedule May 2, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I love the descriptions about them flying. The humor about Fen's horsecock was too funny. I am really glad I found this fic !!!!!!
schedule May 2, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Ethan's mental break-down was very realistic, their relationship was too smooth too soon. Great job at writing that difficult time.
person Rossiu
schedule April 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I love this story so much! Please update... I've been checking almost every day to see if the next chapter is up. I really wanna know what happens next^^ gracias!
schedule April 17, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I loved it. I thought the king was good right along with Ethan, but he is a real bastard to hurt his son like that. It was also really funny how the slightlest thing caused Fen pain. I guess he really is a hornball. Please update. I can't wait to see what happens next.