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by Lunarwench

schedule August 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
omg, Fen had totally something to do with the death of Ethan's parents!!!
person surrealtraversity
schedule August 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Please tell me this isn't gonna be some freaky, twisted, "I killed your parents" thing! I think I might cry. I don't want ANYTHING to tear these two apart.... Fen and Ethan are just PERFECT for each other! Damn it, why can't they just be happy? I hate Fen's dad right now. He's being a manipulative asshole.

Please, please, PLEASE let at least the END of the next chapter be slightly happy, or at least have them on good terms but comforting each other.... at LEAST.
person solerin
schedule August 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I love your story so much! It is so well filled with descriptions of this place you have made and I truly love your characters!
person Rukkai
schedule August 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
YAAAAY!!! I'M SO GLAD YOU'RE BACK! *huggles*

I was worried... you hadn't updated in so so long... it was upsetting. This chapter was so cute! I love Ethan, really I do. He's adorable. I want to steal him in every chapter. And I'd love to sign up for the yahoo thing, but truly, I'm too lazy for that.

keep up the good work though!!
person Anon
schedule August 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I feel so guilty, but I've been keeping up with your stories on here! -smacks self- I'm bad at being patient and waiting... But I don't actually have an account here...

Anyway, I was a little hesitant to comment here, but I'm gonna try cuz this last chapter was so fantastically informative, I want to read it over again. I loooooooooooove your creativity with the Luftleutians! And I miiiiiiiiiiss you!

Plus, I love Pazu. She seems like a great buddy to have.

Anyway, I just had to comment. Miss you, hope you don't get mad at me for keeping up here. >.> I will leave now... V.V

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schedule August 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oh, I am doing a happy dance right now. I have missed this story so much. I absolutely love where you have taken the story.
person smint45
schedule August 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This was so wonderful Pazu is so nice!!!! And I'm so happy Fen did also come!!!! I really think they are a wonderful couple!!!! I can't wait to see what happens next!!! See you in a few!!!!
person Hainaibaka
schedule August 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
OMG... As a avid M/M readier, I have a pretty short list of authors I like to 'stalk', authors whose works I just can't get enough of. My absolute favorites. What I do is I just sit back, wait, and watch for any news or any other other stories that maybe in the works. And you my friend have become one of them. This story is amazing! Your descriptions are so well though out, you are able to take the reader INTO whatever scene they may be reading (even the juicy parts *winks*) and make them feel like they are apart of that world! I love how original the whole story is! I love everything about the story! >_< I don't know how to explain it.... So, I guess, just keep up the awesome work! Read you later! *scampers off*
person Elken
schedule August 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Thanks for the new chapter. I'd very much like to read more. I also want to know what's going to happen with fen and his family. It was nice seeing Ethan acting like brother and sister with Pazu. He actually made a new friend..yay. I wonder how long Fen is going to take it with that collar on?
person alexsei
schedule August 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
You know... stories like this make me wonder... couldn't he ask fen to teach him his language?