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I hope you will be continuing this. It is a good story.

finish it!!

As always, your story has taken off with a bang. I love all the details you add, like Marie’s fish and her books, even her laptop. Since she has a wireless modem, will this play an important role later on?

Marie seems tough. I can’t help thinking though that she is going into an impossible situation. Going into another country where she doesn’t speak the language or can’t read the writing. She doesn’t even have a passport. Her only hope is to find the American Embassy and that’s only if she escapes. I have a bad feeling though, that isn’t going to happen since these guys are pretty prepared for her.

Anyway, I’m really looking forward to the next chapter. Is Mikahl planning on making her a sex slave??? I can’t wait to find out. Great job as usual!

Oooo i'm really going to enjoy this story. I love how you've got it set up so far.

Wow...just wow, Prairie. The situation grows much more intriguing by the minute. I will admit I was surprised about her being kidnapped, but after reading through the chapter, it makes sense. Poor Marie, strong girl that she is. For some reason, I was smiling at all of the "horrible" possibilities her situation could resemble from Bundy to "Hostel". I guess it's because I'm hoping the story won't be like those situations...at least for her sake.

Great update, Prairie, and a marvelous b-day gift. Looking forward to more along with U'sl-kwe, too. ;)

Terrific writing, Prairiefire, and a really intriguing premise. I want dreams like yours! Update soon.

Whew hoo – Prairiefire -- I’m thrilled to see you writing an original and a D/s one at that! That’s my favorite! As always I love your writing style!

So Mikahl is trying to get better acquainted with the lovely Marie. He sounds pretty determined to win her too. I love how you hint at Mikahl’s alpha male personality traits. He certainly doesn’t seem like the kind of man who will be giving up without a fight.

Now he’s back in Russia and he making plans about Marie. Oh my, is he thinking of abducting her? That sounds so tantalizing. Wow! This is great! Keep up the excellent work!

I'm not even going to tell you to write more because I know you are. I KNOW you are.

Very intriguing and grabbing opener, Prairie. Already, I'm curious to know more about Mikahl and what he has in store for Marie. Also, what will her reaction be when something does occur? Mikahl sounds very sexy. More please when you can.

This sounds very interesting, i can't wait to hear more from you

I have that same problem with stringing ideas together i got many good ideas for the story i'm writing but its actually writing the bits that go in between the ideas is whats hard