rate_review Reviews

This is a great start!
You are a good writer. I like your thorough descriptions.
Excited for the next chapter!

hahah i really hope this turns out to be a fun fic ^^; i mean, if it goes dark i'm sure i'll still love it hahah BUT i just see way too many potentionally funny scenese between an exasperated (yet mildly amused)doctor pondering his situation with the crazy (prank prone) creations hahaha just too many good scenes!! Either way i can't wait to see where you will run with this!!

Yeah, not a bad start. You certainly made sure to capture the readers interest..and hey, its not always wise to have sex on a first chapter, kinda like having sex on first date, lol.
Reel the readers in, little writer...reel them in!

Haha I like this story a lot.

PO ...tential, can't wait for the kicker...the boy's obviousily more than he appears!
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