rate_review Reviews

Hmm. The one danger you're in is creating a "lesbian clique at an all girl's school story" that doesn't read much like the others, and avoids general cliches.

Why does every single author like shaved...it's beyond me...

Anyway...nice so far but just be careful to avoid the "omg we're all lesbians let's have an orgy woot!" and ensure that some real emotion is in place. Your protagonist just left her girlfriend and now she's just eating any pussy she can find. And...you seem to hint that she fucked her sister. If that's true, fine, but make it clear one way or another.

Those are just my two cents. Keep it up.

Havn't read it all, but what I've read is really amazing. Your language has such an expressiveness one has to believe every single word. And the sex is great ;-). And although I read it with great care, I can't think up any critics besides the ocassional lapsus or minor logical issues. Keep up your great work!

ohmigod!!!!! This story is soo hot, i swear i get wetter with every word. I get shivers in my own pussy whenever a pussy in the story is getting a good licking. I swear i love u soo freaking much 4 writing this i wanna lick u up and down and all around (hint hint) but really the story roxxx my pussy!!!! If ur a girl very hott but if ur a guy i still wanna lick ur cock off!! Call me hot stuff!! i will b waiting... Naked...

Wow. I read all the five chapters in one go.
It was definitely worth my time, and I'm shocked to see that there aren't other reviews.

The sex scenes were incredibly realistic. I should know since I've had some steamy, hot lesbian sex myself. ;) And coming from a man (You are a man right? Your nickname suggests it, but you can never know... lol) it just doubles my awe.
You definitely have a talent for writing. Keep it up.