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for Scent of a Girl

by mrtvm

person DuchessVenomania
schedule June 19, 2013 at 12:00 AM
This is an excellent story! For about a week I've read a few chapters a day, I finally reached the end and I don't know if I want to celebrate or cry. I'm hoping for updates, and if they don't come I don't know what I'll do D: I really love how this story messed with my emotions. There were moments when I cried from happiness (like when Maxie and Sarah danced in Fast Eddie's), moments when I wanted to jump into the stoy and kick a charater's ass, and other times when I was so surprised that I just had to stop reading so I could let it all sink in. I also enjoyed how you made my view of some characters change. I hated Maxie, Cindy, Megan, Chi, and Courtney at first but my emotions toward them changed. Just like at first I liked Bre, and now I don't care for her that much. I could honestly go on forever about the details that make this story so awesome, but then I'd be writing a novel. So, great job! I hope to see this updated soon :)
schedule August 16, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Woo!!! keep going.
person Mags
schedule July 19, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Hi! I LOOOve your story, I really like the way you describe the school, I wish I could have attended one like that, it'd have been such fun :P And how you write in everyone's p.o.v., that's cool too because we can have an idea of what's going on in the characters' minds. I had read the story till ch. 24, but when I saw it re-posted I read it all again, none-stop! And now here is one more chapter, YAAAAAY! Please post more soon! :) Mags
person ChocolateZombie
schedule June 28, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Great story, and great plot. Read all 20 so far. The only gripe I have is that this thing is chock full of grammatical errors and whatnot, but I can still understand the story completely. Hopefully the next chapter comes soon :D
schedule June 21, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I loved this!! It is such a great story, & I hope you keep it up!
schedule May 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
awesome story. so much drama, i love it! and all of your characters are so interesting and different. cant wait to see what happens next...

-waits for more-
schedule March 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
So far I love this story. I'm dying to read more. I love the pairings and with all the drama it is still realistic. I also love the character development. I think so far Maxie has the most. We see a real change in her from the beginning. I like Molly but Maxie so far is my favorite Character. Its not easy to understand someone like Maxie and I am eager to learn more about her. Now after Chapter 13 I'm finding myself very curious about Cindy.

I can not wait for the next chapter.

person todraw13
schedule June 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
this was great
i hope for more

person DB1
schedule December 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
@9 awesome story i love it. please update soon


*DB*
person Shahar
schedule December 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
oh wow ur a good writer
jeezz triangles much
lol yay everyone is paired up and hopefully everything is good
cant wait for next update
luv Shahar

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