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October 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hi, again. Still pretty much in awe.
I love how you can take pretty much the same idea and turn it into two different stories; similar enough to tease, but different enough to warrant individual attention. Not many people can do that.
That poor cop, it was inevitable that he was going to snap, wasn't it? It's kind of funny that even when he's on the brink of sexual insanity, your woman has the nerve to instigate. Crazy Irish bitch indeed!
You didn't outright say you were done with this one; can we take that to mean that there might be more in the future? The idea is simply too good to let go! Or perhaps you could turn it into a running series of short stories; The Apartment Teasers, or some such thing.
I love how you can take pretty much the same idea and turn it into two different stories; similar enough to tease, but different enough to warrant individual attention. Not many people can do that.
That poor cop, it was inevitable that he was going to snap, wasn't it? It's kind of funny that even when he's on the brink of sexual insanity, your woman has the nerve to instigate. Crazy Irish bitch indeed!
You didn't outright say you were done with this one; can we take that to mean that there might be more in the future? The idea is simply too good to let go! Or perhaps you could turn it into a running series of short stories; The Apartment Teasers, or some such thing.
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October 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Whew hoo! This was great! You write very well and I just love the way your character tries to weasel out of everything. "Oh god no, I rarely even do it. It's not even mine!” Yeah, that sounds believable. lol
In fact your dialog is hilarious. “Stop bouncing my head off the fucking wall!” “I’ll start screaming police brutality!” Yep she’s lippy as hell!
Of course he has some clever lines too. "Don't you ever try to get away from me when I'm fucking you." How funny. He so bossy and domineering, it’s great! And now he wants to ream her ass – oh my!
Anyway I enjoyed this a lot. I hope you decided to continue it.
In fact your dialog is hilarious. “Stop bouncing my head off the fucking wall!” “I’ll start screaming police brutality!” Yep she’s lippy as hell!
Of course he has some clever lines too. "Don't you ever try to get away from me when I'm fucking you." How funny. He so bossy and domineering, it’s great! And now he wants to ream her ass – oh my!
Anyway I enjoyed this a lot. I hope you decided to continue it.
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October 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh my god *_*
Is it bad to have a uniform, er, tall/ripped guy fetish?
I hope you write a second chapter!
Is it bad to have a uniform, er, tall/ripped guy fetish?
I hope you write a second chapter!
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October 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I'm officially a fan of your work.
Well written and strangely easy to imagine.
I enjoyed it (but then again the whole tall dark and handsome thing really does it for me).
Well written and strangely easy to imagine.
I enjoyed it (but then again the whole tall dark and handsome thing really does it for me).
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October 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That was awesome, i'd love to see you continue this