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for Mixing Business with Pleasure

by sexiipinai

person Terra
schedule March 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I thought it was really good, You did a really good job.
person anonymous
schedule October 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Child's play. Not as errotic as I thought it would be. Try something in the kids section, you little wanna-be errotic writer.
person Anonymous
schedule October 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow, that's hot. Damn. I never knew some karate teachers would like their students like that. ;) Hope you write more.
person Lyfe
schedule October 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
First time I've read a martial arts instructor/student story. Heh, it was pretty basic but hey it was good! I'm sure that with time you can write some good ones, looking forward to it! Heh, it was HOT!
schedule October 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That was really great to read very hot. I loved it. I hope to see more original works from you.
person anon
schedule October 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
needs some work
person Serena
schedule October 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I'd log in, but I'm too lazy right now lol. Great work, sis!