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by Minkx

person Ergott
schedule October 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I don't generally find the energy to review and when I do I usually have a lot to say, or at least something constructive to offer. But for you...

Well, I'm in awe. You've rendered me nearly speechless. I read this last night, and it stayed on my mind so much that I decided I just had to review. You certainly leave your mark on the reader, don't you?

You struck such a wonderful balance! There was a lot of background info, but it stayed interesting and, to be perfectly honest, extremely entertaining. I like how you made them both obsessed; girl willing to pine from afar, and guy completely willing to do something about you. You write very strong characters, and I can't tell you how incredibly delicious your guy is. Simply too amazing for words. I know you said this was complete, but that cliffhanger is a bit cruel.

Anyway, this was by far one of the best reads I've had all month, I'll definitely be on the lookout for more from you.
person Marie1
schedule October 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Fuck girl, I want that man, very badly...
person Acal
schedule October 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow... that was so seriously hot, i love your work thats the second awesome piece i've read
schedule October 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Thanks! I really enjoyed reading this! I can't decide if I want more though. I do, but at the same time, I'm really digging the cliff hanger! It's a little bit of a thrill, not knowing anything about Him and what he wants exactly.... Anyway, it was well written and uber-yummy. Keep up the good work!

~L
schedule October 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Sheer hotness! Will there be more? Excellent writing.
person maccam
schedule October 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Is there going to be more???/