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for Unnatural Love

by stripedstockings

person mrgrey
schedule October 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Good story. Please make another chapter.
schedule October 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
English is one of my best subjects. ._. (besides Science and Art.) I actually made the story up all by myself. My boyfriend and I were talking about plushophilia, and he said I should make a story about it, and I did. I thought about how I could make it work.. With a teddy bear. The most logical thing was for her to be insane. And then, I had to have reasons for her to be insane. XD I deal with a lot of this stuff in my life, so I know how it can affect people. :3

But thank you. ^__^ Positive feedbacks rawk.
( Err... Somehow I tried to just delete my comment.. And I accidentally deleted the last person, too. Somehow.)
person Lyfe
schedule October 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Heh I read this before and I don't know if I had reviewed or not but I gotta say, you sure know how to write. Just learn to watch for the simple typos and stuff. Yeah, I know we're all human but believe me, the mistakes can make someone's life miserable. I read this one fic, dunno if it was on this site or not but I came across a word that I could NOT read. No, it was...causing me to draw a blank in my mind.

Anyways, I'm all for weird fics...sometimes but whoa...the teddy bear was weird. Still it was great. I hope I can write one and post one of my own soon (no not a teddy bear one!) but...eh, college, life, family, the works y'know?
schedule October 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hmm...it was, intriguing, to say the least.

Overall, however, I have to say that it was well-written, and I was actually surprised by how well you pulled it off. I'm very impressed. Excellent job, and keep up the good work!
person thePD1
schedule September 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow, that was very creepy :D I loved it

However, one small edit note: At the start she was wearing a pink thong, later it became black as she started playin' with herself. Just a note :)
schedule September 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
XD Thanks for both things. *Fixed it.* :3
person ecstatic
schedule September 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i was a little sceptical when i heard the teddy bear bit, but i must admit you totally pulled it off :D well done!