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for Another World

by Minkx

schedule September 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
that was hott! but ya kinda did leave me hanging there. I want to know what happened to the other girl. and what happens when they go back to the kull's world.
still that was really good.
schedule September 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
interesting start is there more?
schedule September 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh, yes there definitely has to be more. You have a beautiful way of writing, almost poetic, that brings to life the characters. I have a feeling that taking her back to the home world is going to turn things on their head in more ways than one.