rate_review Reviews

Soren is a bitter bastard, but I'm curious to see what happens.

This chapter wasn't bad, but Soar's outburst at Michael was really abrupt. It sort of felt out of place with the rest of their reactions with each other. But, I'm glad Harvey is back :)

I like it but it's hard to read. There's a lot of detail that's sort of excessive and I admittedly skip parts of a few paragraphs to get to the action/dialogue. (That might just be me, loads of people probably appreciate a lot of detail) But, I like Soren's character and the direction the story's going in. I'll definitely keep reading.

By the way: I think you might've changed his hair colour from brown to blond through the chapters.

Good story! waiting for more....

This is a really exceptional story, I look forward to reading more of it.

CHAPTER 2
Hi, Sperks. Whatever happened to chapter two? All I see is a disclamer #2. Chapter 1 was pretty good.

Hi!!!!
^_^

Very detailed, very intriguing, but where is the story going? Is Harvey an important character? Or is this just a prologue to introduce Soren?

Anyway, I promise I'm not stalking you. ^_^ I think your stories are good because your characters don't jump into bed on the first chapter.

Can't Wait for the Next Update!

Much Love
Dee