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September 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I hope you will continue this......It's great so far.
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March 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
THis is a awsome story and i would love to have more chapters added
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November 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hey cutie!!! That's an interesting story. Completely random sex scene but funny too. Why blondes?
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September 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Good story, shame it's over. Course that's what sequels are for...hint hint...
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September 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Quite freaky the Lillith parts but its a really good story i like it, though you have a problem with chapter 3 a section of the chapter is corrupted with with !#%!%@ synbols and also a section of chapter 2 is embedded inside chapter 3
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September 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This story was very interesting. I believe you did a "cliched plot" true justice. Too bad it's over already. I was kinda hoping for more. Particularly the sex, but more development of their relationship would be good too. Well anyways, good story. Keep up the good work.