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i was excited to see you continuing this after so long. i would reread the first part every now and then and wonder if you were going to continue it and i really like where it's going. i enjoy your usual style but i found this to be a refreshing and interesting change.

This story is certainly interesting, and very different. Which is a good thing! I really like it, and I also think it would be cool to have a chapter from the alien's point of view? I'm curious abut how they think, and why they decided to take humans and all that. Please update soon! :D

Now I wanna know what happens to Richard and the other humans! The alien too if it's brought up ^^;
Im so happy They're back together, I thought the whole lost in the forest bit would take a lot longer :p
I can't wait for the next chapter hun! Till then~

For some reason I can't review logged in? Trying it this way, but it happended yesterday too...

Oh my God!!!!! I can't believe it! O.O you actually update!!! ohhhh thankssssss (hugs and kisses) ^_^

wow, what a turn of events! O.o how could these humans hide for 3 weeks? now that he is awake can he make connection with CH? I really do hope so! but maybe they think he was into this whole attack thing with the other humans! I do hope so that the pendant would help save his life in some point. :)

ohhhh, I want to read more! I gets so interesting! two thumbs up! :D

update soon ;)

i love love love this story!! super hott! please update soon =]

You know what?! I love you! :D I just love you! ^_^

I said please update soon but I never ever think you are gonna update in a day!!! O.O it was just delightful :) I wish I could read a chapter per day!

It seems like he is becoming the leader without understanding it himself!!! I hope that is the same city they were in before but I was wondering: if CH and him can make communications without speaking, how come they can't communicate right now?! is the distance an issue?! He should be able to hear CH in his mind!

Well I do hope so CH finds him as soon as possible! and that he wouldn't think that he is somehow behind the whole revolution thing! :(

Well, again, update soon! more kisses and hugs

(if it's in a day, my mom will definitely thinks her daughter is crazy! I was jumping when I saw you updated chapter 6!!! lol this time I will scream ;) well I love your fic ) ^_^

Omg I love this story, so frickin much! I wasn't too sure about it at first, but then I got to the second chapter and I just fell in love. I'm completely addicted to it and can't wait to find out what happens next! Pleaaaaase update soon!!!!!!!!

I'm happy you're back to this story. I don't think Orlando will have a good reception in the city, especially if he's with Richard. That is, if he makes it there. I loved it when he hit Richard, but I can also see that he can't survive alone. It's exciting that he's forced to work with a bigot and murderer. I can see this getting intense.

I also loved your recent rape fantasy.

Hi,

I just read the 4 chapters back to back! It was really amazing! your aliens are different from whatever I have read until today! the relationship development between these two was awsome as well!

Why didn't you continue it?????? O.O I want more! T.T please please please ... could you continue it again??? please?

I am surprised that I had not read this story as yet. This whole alien world that you created is quite amazing. Orlando is also quite spunky. I really enjoyed reading it.