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You know, this is not exatly the story I'm used to, and it kind of threw me off in the beginning. Especially since Orlando's personality is one I easilly identify with. Regardless, you did manage to draw me in splendidly, and now I do truely love Orlando :)
And I am also quite intrigued by the alien anatomy. I wonder how they call themselves.

lol, it certainly make me curious as well! :D Please do tell us about it! ;)

hmmm, everything start to make sense even more but I'm wondering where you want to take this story to? :D

Emm... a question: how exactly do these aliens reproduce? lol well ... don't kill me, I just have to know! :D it could get very interesting! :p they are all males, aren't they?! any females among them? emmm...

Well, I should wait I guess ^_^ thanks a lot for the update ;)

do you have a mailing list for this story? If you don't, you should start one! And if you do, I would love it if you would add me. :^

WOw! Your story is a breath of fresh air. Lolz I'm glad Orlando is happy with his alien. With your description, I feel as though Chadaan and the other aliens look kinda ethereal? Hmmm....this is definitely different than other stories I have read. Great job! I'll stay tune for your next update.

YAY!! I came back to 3 updates! aaand they had everything. Richards out of the picture...for now i guess. And some hot alien smexing. I love Chadann. I think its because hes mysterious and soft spoken haha. Orlando is adorable too. Hes full of energy and spark. Chapter 8 makes me think that theres some secrets that are being kept....cant wait to find out!! =)

OMG!!!!!!! O.O

He is the ruler? O.o lol that makes thing much more interesting! :D lol Is Orlando very handsome? I mean there should be a reason why Chaddan chose him to be his pet in the first place???

and what have happened to Richard? Is he back here so another alien come and pick him?

and and does Orlando find a new job of introducing humans to their new life? I mean he can help! lol

This fic is getting better and better!

Thanks for the update ;)

Great chapters Laevi. Now we know how animals feel when we steal them from their natural habitat. I can't wait for the next chapter

Yaay! Great new chapter Laevi. Orlando is truly in a tight spot. He has been stolen away from the gentle Chadann and who knows what the rest of the planet is like. Plus I imagine that Richard will be in deep trouble for attacking and possibly murdering his master. You really are in super creative mode. I think your other new story may have been hidden because I can't find it anymore. I hope you will update soon.

yay!! two updatss!? youre awesome. I cant stand Richard. Please let Chadann rescue him! Cant wait for that "havent seen you in weeks" sex! =)

Laevi,

I'm actually in love with you! ^.~

I don't know what to say but thank you! xoxo

Finally CH showed up!!! I thought he should be around, it was so strange that the aliens hadn't found them in 3 weeks!!!

and who exactly CH is??? he seems to be very important! for his pet not to be touch at all ...!!!

Well, I like to see what's gonna happen to Richard :D I mean his owner is not dead and he is coming back to fetch him and it's gonna be very interesting that how he is gonna pay back Richard! lol I'm certainly looking forward to read the rest!

can I hope that you are going to update tomorrow as well? :D (keep my fingers cross) ;)

thanks again ^_^