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Hi Laevi,

Sorry for the delay! :p I was reading the darkest adventure and couldn't put it down and read this one! lol

hmm, not much of Orlando but Richard was something! lol I think he gets to enjoy himself very much! :D it was a little bit funny to see him having sex with the person he tried to kill before and enjoying himself!

I really enjoy this fic especially because prompt updates! O.O the environment, the aliens everything was new and very interesting! Also thanks a lot for answering my questions within the story! I got one more question which I hope you can answer in future, if you decide to write a sequel. Well, I was wondering about their age? How long these aliens will live and how do they die? I mean compare to human life! If Orlando dies after let say 40 years, Chaddan will be very sad and lonely to live with out him for another thousand year or so?!!! T.T

hmmm... let me tell you: I think I really like to read more stories of different people who have been abducted in the same universe! to see what happen to the rest of them. and as you mention in chapter 9, Orlando is going to see some humans than can't adapt very well and easily! I really want to see that if you have time to write it! It reminds me of the Kabi's fictions, November and August. Have you read them?! Both of your universes are very unique and I'm sure every one here in AFF would like to read more of your universe and aliens and humans ;)

Thanks again. It was very joyful for me reading this fic every midnight before sleeping ;) hope you continue it some time in future ^_^

I love the ending Laevi. This is the most creative story I have read for a long time - creating a whole alien world. I hope you will do some artwork for this story. I would truly love to see what Chaddan and Julam look like. If you are truly working on old stories, I would love to see more of Roy and Drake. That was the first story of yours that I ever read and I was hooked instantly. Cheers!

kylee

My perverted brain did a double flip at the idea of peeking at Richard's first experience with Julam. I think he is going to enjoy himself once he warms up to Julam.

OMG no way is orlando as curious as me! oh please don't just have richie baby talk about please please do the whole scene. I just want to know what goes on in that head of his especially as he does something so alien (pardon the pun) to him. heheheheh

Oh, so awesome! By chapter 9 I was hoping you would have a sequel showing Richard fucking an alien, then you gave it to me in chapter 10! And Chadan and Orlando were sexier now than in their first time. I loved Chadan playing with Orlando in front of Julam.

I would like a sequel sometime. It was ominous to hear that there would be peace only as long as Chadan is in power. I don't want Chadan to die, but if he were incapacitated for a time, we'd learn a lot more about Lotar aggressiveness. Please?

I liked how humane they were in this story but also would like to see a more wicked side. It was also intriguing to hear that Julam had hit Richard. So they like aggressiveness, and they don't die easy. Then is violence different to them?

Cool to hear that their women are essentially men. Is that only physical or also behavioral? See, we still want to know more. And are there any other pet species? More alien love slaves, please!

So it's the equal to flashing lol!!! XD I was very happy with this chapter, and I do hope to see a sequal, maybe with the next generation of human pets? They could make human babies from their tubes right? Oh well, if there is a sequal I will definatly read it! Thank you so much for sharing hun, Until next time! ~Passing Reader

This is one of the oddest stories I've ever read. Though, I won't lie, I really liked it. It's definately different from the other alien stories I've ever read, especially how you describe the aliens, especially when it came to anotomy and sex. It seemed a little fast paced, by how quickly Orlando was to accept everything, but that didn't really bother me, considering how amazingly good you write :)

Hope you do end up writing a second part, I know if I ever see it I'll definately be reading it! (Though, I'm kind of hoping it'll still have some Orlando/Chadann in it ;)

Ohh.. I'd say he is very important. xD

Great updates, love the story!

OMG it's been so long since you updated that I was beginning to think you put this story on hiatus! I'm so glad to see that you didn't. I hope Mary likes her new owner and I'm glad that Richard is going to be given a second chance. Hope he doesn't screw it up.

Im curious too lol! I wonder if the first human there stuck out his tounge at his master? Would it be a rude gesture or the equivalent of flashing? XD Lovely chapter hun, can't wait for more! :3