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December 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
More please. :)
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August 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh pleasepleasepleaseplease write more! Pleeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeaaaaaaaaaseeeee! I demand more! *bangs her fist on table* MOOOOOOOOOORE!
LOL
I love the wording of this; the plot, the...the everything! The laughter, the tention, the simple plot itself. It's amazing. I adore it.
God! If she won't kiss him soon, I'm about to do it! I can't wait for their first kiss; for Kevin to just take his love and make her his. You are doing an amazing job. I know as an author how it is not to get many reviews when you have like a million hits, so I almost always review a story I read, but not always. Only the ones I feel have promise or that really touch me. This is one like that. You are an amazing author; your imagery and your words...your description of emotion and even small things like silence and humour. The whole "Oh, excuse me. Pardon me. Will you get out of my way?" thing made me burst out laughing, as well as the whole tomato crack. Amazing.
I love a story that will make me laugh and smile as well as truly send my heart out to the reader. This does that. I'm glad she slapped that bitch for hurting Kev. You just don't do that. *growls at Karen*
Please continue this. Please. Does she have dark hair? Red hair? I some how picture her with either. Either dark or red or an auburn color. I don't think you've given her a look yet...or if you have, I'm not sure you've written it down? I need to go back and look. *smiles*
Hey, know this. Even if you feel you've got no one online that likes your tale, know you've always got me. I'm Nila, and I love this story. You're great and I'll be sticking this into my favourites and checking back every day for updates.
*hugs tight*
Love Nila
ficchantress1218@gmail.com
AIM: Lucifers Ayngel
MSN: raven_temptress1218@hotmail.com
YIM: luiniltelcontar
You can do it.
LOL
I love the wording of this; the plot, the...the everything! The laughter, the tention, the simple plot itself. It's amazing. I adore it.
God! If she won't kiss him soon, I'm about to do it! I can't wait for their first kiss; for Kevin to just take his love and make her his. You are doing an amazing job. I know as an author how it is not to get many reviews when you have like a million hits, so I almost always review a story I read, but not always. Only the ones I feel have promise or that really touch me. This is one like that. You are an amazing author; your imagery and your words...your description of emotion and even small things like silence and humour. The whole "Oh, excuse me. Pardon me. Will you get out of my way?" thing made me burst out laughing, as well as the whole tomato crack. Amazing.
I love a story that will make me laugh and smile as well as truly send my heart out to the reader. This does that. I'm glad she slapped that bitch for hurting Kev. You just don't do that. *growls at Karen*
Please continue this. Please. Does she have dark hair? Red hair? I some how picture her with either. Either dark or red or an auburn color. I don't think you've given her a look yet...or if you have, I'm not sure you've written it down? I need to go back and look. *smiles*
Hey, know this. Even if you feel you've got no one online that likes your tale, know you've always got me. I'm Nila, and I love this story. You're great and I'll be sticking this into my favourites and checking back every day for updates.
*hugs tight*
Love Nila
ficchantress1218@gmail.com
AIM: Lucifers Ayngel
MSN: raven_temptress1218@hotmail.com
YIM: luiniltelcontar
You can do it.
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August 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Yaaaaaaaaaay! Another update! I love you! LOL
This chapter was very teasing. Their kisses...god...that leaves many doors open for serious makeout sessions and sex...Of course. *giggles*
OH I can't wait for you to update again! I hope you will when ideas come to you! And if ya ever need help with the more...aahh...intimate parts, I'd be glad to help you.
*hugs tight* Great job, Kenly. You're amazing.
*checks the head inflation gage again and sighs dramatically* Sorry, girl. Another 3 or so inches of hot air.
*giggles*
Love Nila
This chapter was very teasing. Their kisses...god...that leaves many doors open for serious makeout sessions and sex...Of course. *giggles*
OH I can't wait for you to update again! I hope you will when ideas come to you! And if ya ever need help with the more...aahh...intimate parts, I'd be glad to help you.
*hugs tight* Great job, Kenly. You're amazing.
*checks the head inflation gage again and sighs dramatically* Sorry, girl. Another 3 or so inches of hot air.
*giggles*
Love Nila
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August 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I like this a lot! I'm glad i cought up to it before there were too many chapters, can't wait for the next update.
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November 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful
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November 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I don't know what to tell you to make the story better, because you're writing great... but please continue this story and keep writing, i know I'm waiting for more...
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October 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Good story. more please.
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October 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love this story <3
It's... it's really, REALLY nice. I hope you add another chapter!
It's... it's really, REALLY nice. I hope you add another chapter!
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October 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Too cute, needs update.