rate_review Reviews

I like how its coming along. Very interesting. Its great that you don't reveal everything right away. Anyways, I would love to read more.

I like it so far. I don't really understand the bit of madness existing as an alternate universe or something but it is an interesting take on the human consciousness. You might also want to get a beta to get feedback on your chs if you are concerned about hitting the right note. Also I noticed some spelling errors,ex. waist=waste.