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December 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This is a fine beginning. Please keep updating
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September 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
“Don’t be so sure of yourself, Drakus. Our wedding date is far off. Much can happen between the span of two moons.”
“Do not make ideal threats, Princess. They only anger me, and trust me when I say you do not want to make me angry.”
“I refuse to marry a man who thinks he can intimidate me! I am not some meek peasant woman who’s only wish and desire is to please her husband! I will never be that woman. I am a free woman and no man is going to cage me. The day we marry, Drakus, is the day Atlantis will die.” Aleera spun on her heel and stormed through the gates. They slammed shut behind her in Drakus’s face. Her temper had returned. How she despised men like Drakus!"
Oh my god......MORE MORE MORE! I love Aleera, I hope she gives Drakus a run for his money. And Drakus is very sexy, I can't wait to see how he will handle Aleera!
“Do not make ideal threats, Princess. They only anger me, and trust me when I say you do not want to make me angry.”
“I refuse to marry a man who thinks he can intimidate me! I am not some meek peasant woman who’s only wish and desire is to please her husband! I will never be that woman. I am a free woman and no man is going to cage me. The day we marry, Drakus, is the day Atlantis will die.” Aleera spun on her heel and stormed through the gates. They slammed shut behind her in Drakus’s face. Her temper had returned. How she despised men like Drakus!"
Oh my god......MORE MORE MORE! I love Aleera, I hope she gives Drakus a run for his money. And Drakus is very sexy, I can't wait to see how he will handle Aleera!
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September 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I feel it has potential but here are some errors...sprelling and awkward sentences that can be imporved. Like you spelled idle ideal...don't know if that was intentional or not. and the heated scenes may need more intensity but overall it was alright