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October 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
My God, you have to update soon! You can't just leave us hanging like that! XD I love this story already, I'm so eager to see how it continues!
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October 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I like it I like it! Are you gonna continue it?? Please please?
I love innocent submissive subs! I can't wait to see what happens next!
I love innocent submissive subs! I can't wait to see what happens next!
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September 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I really really like it! Good job!
I want to read moreee:0
I want to read moreee:0
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September 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
love it! he's so cuuuuuuuuuuute and angsty! keep going please!
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September 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I like the general idea, but it is kind of far fetched that Flynn wouldn't have any friends, any experience, no one likes him, its almost a mary sue in my opinion. But I like the sub aspect of the story and the master is good. I do feel sorry for Flynn, but it looks like his master is about to change his life. Good all around besides what I mentioned and I hope you conintue. I would like to see where you take this and how your characters evolve.
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September 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
cute start very enjoyable
i like the characters and want too see more
i like the characters and want too see more
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September 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
awe it's kinda cute. even if the story's not that believable. oh well i'm still enjoying it.
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September 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Not bad ^^ Do another chapter soooooon. It's hard to find a good D/s fic these days.
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September 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hello there!
I have to say that this first chapter really looks very promising.I have been following a few stories here that are really good,but there’s been quite some time since something new and interesting showed up.
I like this concept,and I like Flynn,as inexperienced and socially inept as he is.At first it looked kind of strange,but as the chapter progressed I realised that he turned out quiet well being deprived of normal human contact all his life.
I think that being who he is,and how he is,for Flynn this concept Dom/Sub,Master/Pet will be just fine.Some people just need somebody in their life to guide them through it.
Flynn will might be able to finally “blossom” into a person he was meant to be,and gain some confidence and selfesteem,under Jason’s loving but firm hand.At least to me it looks like the direction that this story is going(I hope :o))
Anyway,to cut the long story short,I really like this chapter.Even though I’m hoping that you’ll give us the more detailed description of the characters,especially Flynn.
Keep the good work.I’ll be waiting for your next chapter.
Many hugs,Darma!!!
I have to say that this first chapter really looks very promising.I have been following a few stories here that are really good,but there’s been quite some time since something new and interesting showed up.
I like this concept,and I like Flynn,as inexperienced and socially inept as he is.At first it looked kind of strange,but as the chapter progressed I realised that he turned out quiet well being deprived of normal human contact all his life.
I think that being who he is,and how he is,for Flynn this concept Dom/Sub,Master/Pet will be just fine.Some people just need somebody in their life to guide them through it.
Flynn will might be able to finally “blossom” into a person he was meant to be,and gain some confidence and selfesteem,under Jason’s loving but firm hand.At least to me it looks like the direction that this story is going(I hope :o))
Anyway,to cut the long story short,I really like this chapter.Even though I’m hoping that you’ll give us the more detailed description of the characters,especially Flynn.
Keep the good work.I’ll be waiting for your next chapter.
Many hugs,Darma!!!
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September 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Great story - so cute and sweet! Loving it :p