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February 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Progress? Sort of.. lol. Flynn's great.
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February 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Finally! I've been waiting for you to write more chapters since the first. Great story! Please update more!
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February 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Awesome story, I can't wait to read more. ^_^
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February 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This story is so cute! It's very different from the D/s stories that usually catch my eye, but I really, really like it. I liked the hints of Flynn's past; if they play out the way I think they will, then it's less surprising that Flynn is such a loner. I'm looking forward to seeing more from Jason's perspective, but I really love the way you're developing Flynn.
I heart this story!
I heart this story!
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February 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i love your story!! so cute! i hope you make it long, or make a sequel or... well just don't stop writing, please ^^
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February 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This was surprisingly cute. I do think it's a little strange that Flynn has been so totally isolated for so long, but you may cover that more in later chapters, so I'll keep my trap shut. I like that Jason has such dimension as a Dom. I'm looking forward to seeing what you do with this story!
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February 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hope to see more.
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February 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OMG!! its really really good!!!!! please update soon i cant wait to no what happens.
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November 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I like this story and I can't wait for you to add another chapter.
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November 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Please continue this. You've really nailed the psyche of the naturally submissive.