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for Wannabe Sub

by squirrelactivist

person Anon
schedule March 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
hey i wouldn't mind being your Beta Reader. e-mail me if you want me to be. bye bye keep up the good work.
schedule March 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Awesome, I can't wait to read what happens next. ^_^
person Kaiti
schedule February 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Love the way the stories going! I'm up for editing and helping if you'd like!
person Ghost Of Elysium
schedule February 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
*sweatdrop* Holy crap, Flynn is Me XD
In the "we are like completely indentical kinda weird way"
Haha, anyway I think it's an interesting story. Please continue.
person Rin
schedule February 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I am really enjoying this story and can't wait to see what comes next.
person szaugg
schedule February 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
You know, i am really enjoying this story. I LIKE stories where the characters have a sweet relationship, fall in love, truly care about each other. It's so hard to find one that has a few kinks but still retains that kind of sweetness to it. It so often seems to get to the point where I honestly feel like the characters are horribly abusive to each other, and it's just painful to see how they are treated and yet still coming back for more.

I am very much looking forward to more. This story left me with such a nice, happy feeling, even when I feel terrible for little Flynn. Thank you for a nice start to my day!
schedule February 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ahhh, Flynn is adorable. He needs smothering in lotsa TLC. :). Love this story, keep writing.
person mayo
schedule February 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh, I love this story! Been waiting for new chapters for a loong while, now! Thanks and good job! :D
person Suzie
schedule February 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I'm so into this story. It was not at all what I expected to find from reading the summary, and I mean that in a good way. I really like Jason as a master and Flynn is pretty adorable. Looking forward to reading the next chapter
schedule February 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
oh what a cute chapter- well of course except the part where flynn cried - otherwise it brought out all my waffy feelings :)