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for Wannabe Sub

by squirrelactivist

schedule November 21, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Gawd I wish there was more to this story. I love the characters.
schedule December 13, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Thanks for the story. It's delightfully plotful (especially considering I was initially looking for a hardcore bondage scene ;)
The equality/caring that Jason insists on is also really nice, romantic. (But I'm definitely seeing a rape/abuse past coming up.)

So, I'm interested in beta-ing for you, if you're still working on it. I'd really like to see this story go further. (already lovin the characters!)
person dorome
schedule August 2, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Hey, i really like this cute story. It is nicly written. And Flynn is such a gorgeous character.
person navajo
schedule May 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
love this story cant wait for an update
person Anon
schedule April 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
a baby horse isn't a pony, it's a foal. ponies are different.
ASOTA
person Anon
schedule April 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i like this story!!! i'd be your beta if you want me! just attach the chapter to an email and send it to me, and once i get done editing, i'll send it back to you.

thethirdkim@hotmail.com

ASOTA
person Anon
schedule April 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
something good about myself...

i'm a sucker for stray cats, and i don't drink any kind of alcohol...

i really like your story, and i'm a kind, honest person...usually ;)

ASOTA
person Mellina
schedule April 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Aw, the sub's adorable. I like my semes a little more aggressive, but it's nice to see him treat his sub nicely. Keep up the good work!
person Purr
schedule April 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I just adore this story. Very different from the usual master/slave situations, and being a sex+fluff whore I can't ask for anything more. Flynn is just the cutest virgin ever (though hopefully that won't be the case for too long >D). Can't wait to read more!
person koala
schedule March 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
read chapter one and I think you're a very good author.
Send me an e-mail if you have any interest in adding this story to another site

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