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for Intertwined Fates

by Acal

person Luinil_Telcontar
schedule March 31, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 1

*melts into lust puddle on floor*
person Luinil_Telcontar
schedule March 31, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 2

*spazes and dies* Oh my God that was hot!
person Elaine
schedule March 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I dont like the sound of Saurtos....he sounds horrific. Poor Joy, I hope she and Carl find her brother soon. Great update again, love the way the story is coming along and I cant wait to read more.
person Elaine
schedule February 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Great update. Was good to find out some background info on Miranda and Carl and im glad that Jake and Kally made up, even if they are in danger. Cant wait to find out what happens. Update soon.
person Elaine
schedule February 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Another great update, cant wait for more. Cant wait to find out what will happen to Kally.
person Elaine
schedule February 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow...the action is really hotting up now...cant wait to find out where all the weird weather is leading and how Kally and Jake get on. Fantastic update as usual, looking forward to more.
person Elaine
schedule February 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Great update. Loved it....fantastic reunion between Carl and Joy. I've been waiting for that one! Looking forward to more.
person Elaine
schedule December 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Another fantastic chapter. Loved Adam and Rachel's story and I like how so much is going on in this story but its so easy to keep up with it all because you write it so well.

Update soon..cant wait to see how this all unfolds and for Carl and Joy to be re-united.
person Krash
schedule December 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love this story. It is exciting from the very start and your imagery is beautiful. Not to mention how hot the sex is. Thankyou for such a beautifully written and engrossing story.
person Elaine
schedule November 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Another excellent chapter. I really cant get enough of this story. I am totally hooked! Please update soon.