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I must confes that I got greedy and searched this story in fanfiction, read few chapters ahead and I'm still enjoying! But I rather read it here, change of names was a bit weird for me, hih. Anyway I just want to tell you again how much I enjoy your writing, your characters and I find them all original. Please write more, I'll be reading ^_^

haha he even wants to fuck him when he's passed out

Man, the general's perspective is SO hot. He's so dirty... I love him. Update soon.

Hope Aspen's okay! And why was he making out with button boy?! :O

I'm not lieing when I say I check on this story almost every few hours to see if there are updates :) I know there aren't any, but...Lol, I hope you update soon!

Honestly, I wasn't expecting very much when I first saw this fanfic, but my opinion of it changed completely after reading the first few paragraphs. You are actually a very talented writer; not many people can pull off stories with more than one POV very well (generally its very dull and uninteresting) but because the two main characters' thoughts differ so drastically I have to read both to figure out exactly what is going on. I love how clueless both of the characters are; the general is so busy imagining who might be taking his little boytoy away from him that he never even stops to consider that he hasn't even had sex before, and Aspen's just so innocent that it's funny. I often find myself wondering how such a person got into the military in the first place. (No, I don't consider this a bad point. It just adds to this stories hilarity. I can't stop smiling as I read this).

However there is one thing I'd like to ask you (more out of curiosity than anything else). When I checked your story on FF.net, I noticed that Aspen was actually Cloud and the general was Sephiroth and I'm just wondering why you decided to change the characters' names on AFF.net.

Anyway, it's a great fic nonetheless, and I look forward to reading more of it. I'm happy that you upload so fast.

Mitts - you set out to deliberately drive your readers insane. I can see that now.

Are you happy to know you succeeded?

Next chapter soon, please...

Awwww, that was real nce of the General. And woah! What happend to Aspen and the Mongrel? I reread that part like three times just to make sure...do I need new glasses lol? Great chapter, update soon please!!!

OHMYGOD. I've been reading this, and man, it has made me LAUGH my ass off and squee with fangirlish pleasure.


WHY, of ALL the FUCKING FUCKING BITCH SHIT FUCKER TIMES, did someone just HAAAAAAAAVE to come in and RUIN it?! KJDSFMASDKLMFAS AUUUUGHHHH!!!!!!!1111,m awsdfkljams dfkadsm


*DIES*

I simply like it!

Well. Um, how to review this latest chapter....Truthfully? I really hated it, which is strange since I've loved this story from the beginning. I thought that Aspen and the General were going somewhere and now, suddenly, Aspen no longer likes the General and fears him. That was a lame turn and I hope you fix it.