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for OBSESSION

by Mitts

person shadow
schedule December 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
finally the mongral is gone!!!
schedule December 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
button boy is a sneaky bastard!
I hope the general makes him sleep outside tonight!
person shiden
schedule December 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
god i dislike immensely button boy
i hope he doesn't pop aspens cherry and its the general w ho gets his first taste of it...
yum yum, please update soon :P
person Kip
schedule December 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Sorry to rush you, 'cos I know these things take time, but more, more! Purr
person Saminada
schedule December 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Awww! Poor Aspen!! T__T
He fainted! I wonder what's going to happen to him next?
And who's going to be the lucky one?? The General? I hope so!
I just can't wait for the General to realize that Aspen's an innocent men!
But I must say... It would take all our fun away! 'cause the general's just so damn funny and perverted!!! LOL

Anyways, I can't wait for more and thanks for the update! *hugs*
person vivid white
schedule December 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Some stories just make it very hard to wait for another chapter. This is one of them. Luckily, you don't make us readers wait long.

Aspen is mad again. ::grin:: Maybe the general will go easier since he's fainted? Great chapter.
person SODA
schedule December 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Awwww, poor Aspen. Button boy gets on my nerves, the prick...lol. Great chapter, update soon please!!!
person Mr. Nice Girl
schedule December 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Amazing stuff. Aspen is so naive. I bet this cream doesn't even exist... Sounds like he's talking about cum. He better have real cream. That would be unfair to poor little Aspen. XD
schedule December 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Poor Aspen fainting like that!!
That's hot picturing the General carrying him!
Thanks for the update!!
schedule December 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
oh cute, i love this. however, i don't really like reading the same thing twice, from different points of view. but i understand some enjoy this. i love aspen, he's adorable. keep writing.