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December 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I so with the General, the mongrel needs to die now. A slow, excruciating death would be preferable. I can't believe all the things he is getting away with. Poor Asphen. I hope he gets to laugh in the face of the mongrels suffering later. If anyone deserves to, he does.
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December 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
ohhh how wonderful!!! do we get afull course next chapter? a full course of yummynessss....... of yum yum yumminess???
PLEASE .........
PLEASE .........
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December 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
almost caught up! I have to say that it was a pleasure reading this again as original. It works well for both! Aspen and the general alone again, and I doubt that the mongrel will get loose anytime soon... and chapters coming up, the one(s) not posted anywhere yet... can't wait!!
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December 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Zaphara can be so sweet! I love it when he gave those gentle kisses... so affectionate~ Could it be that he has fallen for Aspen without realizing it? O.o ... update as soon as you can please~~~
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December 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love it I can't wait to read more...the concept you used is excellent. And I love the way you give both points of veiw. Keep up the good work! <3 Niko
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December 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Well, this was a refreshing chapter!
I loved it! ^^
I so wish I could be in General's place right now! >__<
LOL
Thanks for the chapter! I can't wait for more!! (I know, I'm greedy! Especially when it comes to this story!) ^^
I loved it! ^^
I so wish I could be in General's place right now! >__<
LOL
Thanks for the chapter! I can't wait for more!! (I know, I'm greedy! Especially when it comes to this story!) ^^
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December 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
okay, next chapter will be the one I haven't read yet! =D
But I want to give a short review from these earlier chapters, that I read before in FF,when being impatient ;)
Finally they are alone again! hehe button boy sees to have, er, hard times ahead *snickers* And I wonder will the general finally have his way with sweet little Aspen. I can't wait! :P
But I want to give a short review from these earlier chapters, that I read before in FF,when being impatient ;)
Finally they are alone again! hehe button boy sees to have, er, hard times ahead *snickers* And I wonder will the general finally have his way with sweet little Aspen. I can't wait! :P
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December 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
There was a time when such a conclusion to a chapter would have surely led me to believe that Aspen and the general would - somehow - comsumate their relationship.
No More! Now I know you're just tricking us again. (Not meaning to insinuate that I'm not looking forward to your next trick. ;-))
No More! Now I know you're just tricking us again. (Not meaning to insinuate that I'm not looking forward to your next trick. ;-))
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December 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
No matter how much I cant stand the mongrel, I feel so bad for him...lol. Smedley sounds like a straight up, not even trying to hide it, rapist. Finally, Aspen and the General are alone! Cant wait to see what happens. Great chapter, update soon please!!!!
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December 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ooh, you're so MEAN to 'Buttons' ... although with the way things are going for the General, it's certainly understandable. The kid just keeps on butting in, doesn't he... Yaay for oases... and poor innocent Aspen (although in the last few chapters it seems as though he's starting toward becoming a lot less innocent). Love it. I keep checking the site to see if you've posted anything new - honestly, 'Obsession' is the right word! Purr