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for OBSESSION

by Mitts

person Laie
schedule December 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
LOL, poor, poor Button boy... if you hadn't touched the General's cute little uke-to-be this wouldn't have happened!!! >3

Your story rocks my socks! <3
person SODA
schedule December 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hahahahaha, Button boy cracks me up. Cant wait to see what happens next. Great chapter, update soon please!!!!
schedule December 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
K, seriously, I laughed so hard at this line:

----But my cock wouldn’t fit in the flask. I know….. I tried.------

I loved it!! I got such a great mental image of that!!

Thanks for the update!!
person RJaneyP
schedule December 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Mitts you terrible tease, your making me feel sorry for Button Boy... that's twisted.
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person shadow
schedule December 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OMG Get to the sex!!! you drag this out do long that its like torture!!

update soon please
schedule December 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This is the chapter that makes it clear to me how well you'll write angst. I loved Aspen in this chapter, and am glad he's still enamored with the general. It was sort of touching, all in all. Love this story!
schedule December 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Why does everyone hate Button-boy? I need to re-read to figure out what terrible things he did... Or maybe he's evil just because he has pimples on his butt??

And what will save our little blond cadet this time?
schedule December 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oops...

Forgot to compliment you on the exquisite writing in this chapter. Seriously, the entire story is good - but this chapter really kicked ass. You captured Aspen's headache, his confusion and his not-quite-understood desires so very well.
person Kolgrim
schedule December 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This story is great, simply great! and I loved this chapter, the descriptions, everything. But you're a tease, an evil tease...but I love it anyway and because of it ;)
person Eica
schedule December 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
LOL i like this chapter!! ah ha ha it's funny =]]

yay! Now the the mongrel is gone... ^.^ MORE AWESOMENESS will appear yes? =]]

~Eica