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December 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
CHAPTER 21
Hi Mitts,
This story made me laugh outloud many times. Thank you for posting it! Very well done, both rotating POVs are hilarious and only getting better with every chapter. Somehow you avoid repetition on that, which is sort of hard to do. Both characters are well defined and it's just so cute :) I feel a tad sorry for the button boy, though. Oh, the name of the story is hilarious as well, since now I know what it actually means. Good God! You are writing the sequel as we speak, hopefully.
Thank you for posting OBSESSION and Merry Xmas!
Hi Mitts,
This story made me laugh outloud many times. Thank you for posting it! Very well done, both rotating POVs are hilarious and only getting better with every chapter. Somehow you avoid repetition on that, which is sort of hard to do. Both characters are well defined and it's just so cute :) I feel a tad sorry for the button boy, though. Oh, the name of the story is hilarious as well, since now I know what it actually means. Good God! You are writing the sequel as we speak, hopefully.
Thank you for posting OBSESSION and Merry Xmas!
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December 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Excellent update...finally the general realizes the truth. Please update agian soon! I still love this story to death!
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December 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
the general's point of view always cracks me up, he's so cocky. Those are my favourite chapters. well done!
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December 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
oh my god! NO~~~ don't push in your big #$%* Zaphara! He IS a Virgin! Goodness..... but the foreplay was certainly delicious
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December 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
this is fun, like simon says, where we have to seperate truth from fiction, fact from misinterpretation. so fun XD
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December 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Mitts - thank you so much for this, sweetie. I was beginning to think you would just tease us through Christmas.
I just love how it's working out. The general so surprised - and concerned, too.
Of course, my only previous exposure to Cloud and Ser... has been Pam Nunn. Got the impression that was none too gentle. (Although Cloud certainly remained attracted...)
Hope you have a Happy Christmas!
I just love how it's working out. The general so surprised - and concerned, too.
Of course, my only previous exposure to Cloud and Ser... has been Pam Nunn. Got the impression that was none too gentle. (Although Cloud certainly remained attracted...)
Hope you have a Happy Christmas!
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December 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Poor Aspen... That had to hurt! Oh well, he'll learn to like it, I guess.
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December 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
He really WAS a virgin?……………
FINALLY! Howdense can he be!!?
Anyway, I'm really liking this story!
Thank You!
FINALLY! Howdense can he be!!?
Anyway, I'm really liking this story!
Thank You!
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December 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
NOOOOOO now i gottta wait for the next two chapters!!!! T___T lol
at least you're fast :)
~Eica
at least you're fast :)
~Eica
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December 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Awwwwww, poor Aspen! I thought for sure this was the chapter that answered all their questions, they both have it so wrong. Cant wait for the next one:)! Great chapter, update soon please!!!!