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for OBSESSION

by Mitts

schedule December 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
YAY!!! This was an amazing chapter I loved it! Finally the General gets offf his high horse a bit. Please update soon I can't wait to see what happens.
schedule December 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I absolutely loved this story from start to finish. I hope this isn't the end but if it is, I look forward to your future works. Amazing!
person vivid white
schedule December 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
aspen got the crash course, well, just glad the general was decent about it! Looking forward to the next chapter.
person Laie
schedule December 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Your fic is too awesome for words... I'm obsessed with it! (Pun intended)
person Robyn
schedule December 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow...way behind.

Anyway, now that I am caught up, I am glad to see the General FINALLY understood this wasn't a 'seasoned' soilder he was dealing with.

Now to wonder how it will turn out for the next chapter.
person Rosei
schedule December 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 21

Wow!! What a chapter!!!
So well done!!!! Just like a Harlequin Romance, only BETTER!!!!!!

Thanks Mitts!!!
R
person SODA
schedule December 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Awwww, poor Aspen. What a painful first time...I hope it gets better. Great chapter, update soon please!!!
person shiden
schedule December 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
yay another chapter!!!!

thanks again for writing this,
it has become one of my favourite stories.. i can't wait for the next upload :P
schedule December 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That cant be the last chapter!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
AHHHHHHHHHHHHHH
Well, it was an awesome last chapter!!!!!
I loved your story!
Thanks for continuing it to the end and not abandoning it like so many writers do!!
I can't wait to see your future stuff!
i just love your Seph/cloud, no matter who you make them!
person Rosei
schedule December 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Thank you Mitts!!

Great Xmas, chapter, present, cliffhanger, this side of the Pecos!!!

Your the best!!!!

R