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for OBSESSION

by Mitts

person vivid white
schedule September 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
On with the show. I love these guys. Seriously. But you knew that, didn't you?
person Sekre
schedule September 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Rereading this is fun, especially with the different characters. :)
person SODA
schedule September 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
He has a boyfriend? Cant wait till I find out what actually was keeping him late, now Im ciorious! Great chapter, update soon please!!!
person Princess Stephanie Sephiroth
schedule September 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OOOOOOHHHHHHH!!!!!! Has Aspen been a naughty boy?? lmao Maybe Zaphara should punish him from showing up untidy and late...lmao!
You are my goddess and Queen...Mistress Penny Strife...giggle
I can't wait to read more!
AND thank you SO much for your sweet words...giggle...It always means so much to me! hehehe
person Mr. Nice Girl
schedule September 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This is unbelievably hot and there hasn't even been any explicit sex scenes yet.
person szaugg
schedule September 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I so very much want to read more of this! The cadet is such a cutie! I can hardly wait.
person Ao
schedule September 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
O_o Sephiroth? Cloud?


Zack? I think I know these characters! :B XDD jkjk
schedule September 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I am really liking this! Please continue.
person dutsada
schedule September 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love this! Please update soon~~~~~~
person RJaneyP
schedule September 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Lets get this strait this is not a flame or a criticism or anything nasty... just a playful observation... Oh My a horny Silver-haired General... This lovely little plot bunny is just a tad bit familiar... blue eyed cadet Oh my... Go for it This story is all yours and I can't wait to see what you do with it. A Person such as myself can never get enough horny Silver-haired Generals! Can you dig it? Write quickly I look forward to more! Best Wishes G