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October 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This story is very well written, flows easy, and the characters are damn hot! I can't wait til the General gets his hands on the boy!
Please update soon!
Please update soon!
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October 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I completely love your writing. I like how Aspen suffers in silence, and doesn't dwell on his shortcomings, just accepts them. He is one of the most likeable characters I ever read.
Button boy is making his play... but of course, Aspen doesn't know it. Thanks for another chapter, as usual, I grinned all the way through it.
Button boy is making his play... but of course, Aspen doesn't know it. Thanks for another chapter, as usual, I grinned all the way through it.
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October 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Poor confused boy, lol. I cant picture the General with Pike anyway, either. Cant wait till they get to talk. Great chapter, update soon please!!!
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October 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
aww.. this is going awfully slowly..sniff. why do authors like bieng such teases?!!!! update soon~
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September 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Mitts Darling, your such an awful tease! I am desperate for more adventure of your horny naughty general...oh please can't you write faster! G Whizz hurry
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September 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OH WOW. I WAS JUST ABOUT TO WRITE YOU A MEAN NASTY COMMENT BECAUSE IT REMINDED ALOT LIKE A FAN FIC OF FINAL FANTASY THAT I READ ON FANFIC.NET.I THOUGHT YOU WERE STEALING OF COURSE SO I FOUND THE STORY ON FF.NET AND SAW THAT YOUR THE SAME AUTHOR.
ANYWAYS...
KEEP UPDATEN ;)
ANYWAYS...
KEEP UPDATEN ;)
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September 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh my God! He misunderstood Commander Jake's relationship with the boy.. gosh what is the Zaphara Gonna do when he actually get the boy to his bed already?! Can't wait for Aspen to be molested by him haha
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September 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Love love love it! Poor adorably oblivious Aspen.
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September 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Yay! an update!!!
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September 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Now, let's see, who should I feel sorry for. The desperate Pike, the sexually frustrated General or the soon to be pounced on by someone Cadet. I can't decide.
Since hitting writers wall I needed something to get me laughing, and this was all it took. Luckily, I know better than to be drinking anything when I read it. Thanks. It's a wonderful story! Hot, too, yep
Since hitting writers wall I needed something to get me laughing, and this was all it took. Luckily, I know better than to be drinking anything when I read it. Thanks. It's a wonderful story! Hot, too, yep